I know you like a good design when you see one - how about this redesign?? - GoFuckYourself.com

OY · 05-14-2004, 11:35 AM

http://www.mansionproductions.com/

Feedback is of course highly appreciated.

EviLGuY · 05-14-2004, 11:37 AM

Looks really nice.. a LITTLE bland with the colors, but still very nice.

chemicaleyes · 05-14-2004, 11:40 AM

Nice, smooth and fast.

chaze · 05-14-2004, 11:44 AM

My first thought was "sweet design" but then three bad things came to mind:

too busy

too white

does not cover the whole page width

The third is a more unique preference then the rest.

Good speed though

Downtime · 05-14-2004, 11:52 AM

Design looks great! My only recommendation is add a little color to the mouseovers on the graphics. Speed is great too. Great job!

mammy · 05-14-2004, 11:53 AM

looks like www.siccash.com

chemicaleyes · 05-14-2004, 11:56 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by mammy
looks like www.siccash.com

not really

Webasic · 05-14-2004, 11:57 AM

AWC · 05-14-2004, 12:02 PM

overall the design looks nice... the flash crap sux and is annoying. It detracts from people reading your message.

Cut the winky blinky shit and you will have something.

OY · 05-14-2004, 12:11 PM

OK, great feedback! Keep it coming. I am putting our designers at work to do the modifications that makes the most sense

mammy - guess who did their design

mammy · 05-14-2004, 12:54 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Oystein
OK, great feedback! Keep it coming. I am putting our designers at work to do the modifications that makes the most sense

mammy - guess who did their design

yeah i know u did their design

both design looks good
but they are similar

but however
congrats with redesign, good work

ChewbaCreative · 05-14-2004, 01:18 PM

Esbee · 05-14-2004, 01:53 PM

It took me a while to figure out what I was looking at. I saw "One stop shop for serious webmaster" and thought it was a webmaster resource site. The 'Host Mansion', 'Content Mansion', etc. links enhanced that perception.

Read the first quote: "Buy our famous MAS - Member Area System at the same time as you buy MPA2 and get a $500 discount off MAS!" and said I don't know what the hell an MPA2 is, or what a Member Area System is gonna do for me, but if I'm getting $500 off it's probably expensive as hell.

Looked at the four boxes/icons identified solely by initals MPA2, MAS, CSS, STS and said huh?

Read the next quote: "MPA2 is the ideal solution for companies looking to maximize sale attempt conversions.
The integration of MPA2 into our existing webmaster programs has yielded impressive results." and said what the hell does that mean?

After 30 to 45 seconds of looking at the site I still was basically clueless what the site could do for me. (In defense of those now convinced I'm an idiot, I did start to clue in after that point).

From a technical/aesthetic view it's very appealing but I think I'd tweak parts to make the services/product a bit more obvious. "You got this problem... we've got this solution" type of approach.

Overall it's very nice - just think it could be great with some minor changes.

Halcyon · 05-14-2004, 02:03 PM

The "blandness" with the colored boxes in the center is an excellent deisgn for hilighting your products. I dig it.

webair · 05-14-2004, 02:16 PM

if it were a chick i'd bang it

as for the load time was instant...if it wasn't for you get off the freeking dialup already it's 2004!

OY · 05-14-2004, 02:37 PM

Esbee - good feedback. Especially because you made me realize that we could have become blind to our own products and services - hence THINKING that everyone knows what MPA2 and MAS is... Good point! I need to have them redo that part for sure.

Halycon and MIKE (? webair) -

05-14-2004, 11:35 AM	#1
OY Industry Pioneer Industry Role: Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: USA/EU/ASIA Posts: 5,401	I know you like a good design when you see one - how about this redesign?? http://www.mansionproductions.com/ Feedback is of course highly appreciated. __________________ Around since 1997, and the company that introduced "Cascading Billing" in MPA3® Affiliate Management and Tracking Software Outsourcing With A Norwegian Twist - NordBits - Inquire within!

05-14-2004, 11:40 AM	#3
chemicaleyes UNSTOPPABLE Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: UK :: ICQ# 156068 Posts: 11,569	Nice, smooth and fast. __________________ No way as way, No limitation as limitation. AmeriNOC formally PhatServers

05-14-2004, 11:52 AM	#5
Downtime Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: May 2004 Location: America. Posts: 7,320	Design looks great! My only recommendation is add a little color to the mouseovers on the graphics. Speed is great too. Great job! __________________ #27024067

05-14-2004, 11:53 AM	#6
mammy Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 2,279	looks like www.siccash.com __________________ million dollars for paysite design icq 434954667

05-14-2004, 12:11 PM	#10
OY Industry Pioneer Industry Role: Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: USA/EU/ASIA Posts: 5,401	OK, great feedback! Keep it coming. I am putting our designers at work to do the modifications that makes the most sense mammy - guess who did their design __________________ Around since 1997, and the company that introduced "Cascading Billing" in MPA3® Affiliate Management and Tracking Software Outsourcing With A Norwegian Twist - NordBits - Inquire within!

05-14-2004, 11:37 AM	#2
EviLGuY So Fucking Banned Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: malta Posts: 12,745	Looks really nice.. a LITTLE bland with the colors, but still very nice.

05-14-2004, 11:44 AM	#4
chaze Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 9,752	My first thought was "sweet design" but then three bad things came to mind: too busy too white does not cover the whole page width The third is a more unique preference then the rest. Good speed though

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Webasic Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2004 Posts: 1,889

05-14-2004, 12:02 PM	#9
AWC Confirmed User Join Date: Aug 2001 Location: Bumfuck Posts: 1,223	overall the design looks nice... the flash crap sux and is annoying. It detracts from people reading your message. Cut the winky blinky shit and you will have something.

05-14-2004, 01:18 PM	#12
ChewbaCreative Confirmed User Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 1,118	6/10 __________________ high design. high creative. adultcreative

05-14-2004, 01:53 PM	#13
Esbee Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Northern CA Posts: 109	It took me a while to figure out what I was looking at. I saw "One stop shop for serious webmaster" and thought it was a webmaster resource site. The 'Host Mansion', 'Content Mansion', etc. links enhanced that perception. Read the first quote: "Buy our famous MAS - Member Area System at the same time as you buy MPA2 and get a $500 discount off MAS!" and said I don't know what the hell an MPA2 is, or what a Member Area System is gonna do for me, but if I'm getting $500 off it's probably expensive as hell. Looked at the four boxes/icons identified solely by initals MPA2, MAS, CSS, STS and said huh? Read the next quote: "MPA2 is the ideal solution for companies looking to maximize sale attempt conversions. The integration of MPA2 into our existing webmaster programs has yielded impressive results." and said what the hell does that mean? After 30 to 45 seconds of looking at the site I still was basically clueless what the site could do for me. (In defense of those now convinced I'm an idiot, I did start to clue in after that point). From a technical/aesthetic view it's very appealing but I think I'd tweak parts to make the services/product a bit more obvious. "You got this problem... we've got this solution" type of approach. Overall it's very nice - just think it could be great with some minor changes.

05-14-2004, 02:03 PM	#14
Halcyon Spread The Pink! Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: TrampStampStudios.com Posts: 8,609	The "blandness" with the colored boxes in the center is an excellent deisgn for hilighting your products. I dig it. __________________ HAL on TEDx:

05-14-2004, 02:16 PM	#15
webair Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: NYC, NY Posts: 8,531	if it were a chick i'd bang it as for the load time was instant...if it wasn't for you get off the freeking dialup already it's 2004! __________________ ~ Webair Dedicated Cloud Servers™ ~ WEBAIR VSYS™ Virtual Hosting Platform ~ Superior CDN Network ~ ~ Managed Dedicated hosting Specialists ~ DISCOUNT DOMAIN NAMES! ~ WEBAIR FUSION IO MANAGED CLOUD SERVERS! ~ *ICQ:* 243116321 - *TWITTER* - @WEBAIRINC - E-Mail: [email protected] Last edited by webair; 05-14-2004 at 02:18 PM..

05-14-2004, 02:37 PM	#16
OY Industry Pioneer Industry Role: Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: USA/EU/ASIA Posts: 5,401	Esbee - good feedback. Especially because you made me realize that we could have become blind to our own products and services - hence THINKING that everyone knows what MPA2 and MAS is... Good point! I need to have them redo that part for sure. Halycon and MIKE (? webair) - __________________ Around since 1997, and the company that introduced "Cascading Billing" in MPA3® Affiliate Management and Tracking Software Outsourcing With A Norwegian Twist - NordBits - Inquire within!