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prostock · 05-13-2004, 11:19 PM

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bluff · 05-13-2004, 11:20 PM

they look nice

sean416 · 05-13-2004, 11:21 PM

I dont like them, not very clean looking IMO. But im no expert.. just my

I think if they had better colors and not so many pics down the sides it would look a little sharper.

Esbee · 05-13-2004, 11:45 PM

I like the first one. The pink bars with the white text blend straight into the design - I'd switch those bars up to contrast versus the pink and stand out - else almost no one's gonna read the message. Also not sure if it's not optimized yet, or if you're looking at broadbanders only, but it's frickin' 1.2 meg. Yikes.

Also, those girls have penises.

Second one really needs a way to promote the sales text. So many pics to draw the eyes around the page - but all the text is so small I can't see the eyes ever making it back to to read anything. Might be fine for SE traffic or something, but I would picture TGP surfers scanning the pics, hovering their mouse over them 'til they realized there were no full-size images, and 20 seconds later, having not read a word of text, closed the wind0w to go to the next gallery.

Overall I like the designs but they seem to be relying almost entirely on the images to make the sale. I'd balance the sales pitch between images and copy a bit more.

Lykos · 05-13-2004, 11:50 PM

Looks nice to me bro,keep up with good work

slipkid · 05-14-2004, 02:57 AM

Pretty decent stuff, I like them.

EscortBiz · 05-14-2004, 03:13 AM

surfers will find it easy to navigate and you will see more joins then some complicated designs, I use SIMPLE easy to navigate designs only and I have no regrets.

Congrats and good luck

pure energy · 05-14-2004, 03:19 AM

Looks ok to me.

Merrioc · 05-14-2004, 03:22 AM

both designs could work, the second one I don't really like but it could work. The first design is okay but it needs a clean up, but its a good start.

the other problem, those side thumbs are nice, but put them as a solid image or at least in small groups, your taking up WAY to much space, your main page is 1.14 megs, thats really heavy for a first page, should try and keep it under 700k.

your average 56k user is gonna have to wait 4 minutes to just for the page to load (not nearly as many of those around) a slow cable user might wait 2 minutes.

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bringer · 05-14-2004, 03:24 AM

first one is good
the second is just ok

Roald · 05-14-2004, 03:29 AM

they look ok to me. Can you tell me why you save all images as .jpg? According to me you shoudl also use .gif files as they will be way smaller (not for photos ofcourse).

Good luck with it

05-13-2004, 11:19 PM	#1
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05-13-2004, 11:21 PM	#3
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05-13-2004, 11:50 PM	#5
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05-13-2004, 11:20 PM	#2
bluff Too lazy to set a custom title Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Bluffville Posts: 6,253	they look nice

05-13-2004, 11:45 PM	#4
Esbee Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Northern CA Posts: 109	I like the first one. The pink bars with the white text blend straight into the design - I'd switch those bars up to contrast versus the pink and stand out - else almost no one's gonna read the message. Also not sure if it's not optimized yet, or if you're looking at broadbanders only, but it's frickin' 1.2 meg. Yikes. Also, those girls have penises. Second one really needs a way to promote the sales text. So many pics to draw the eyes around the page - but all the text is so small I can't see the eyes ever making it back to to read anything. Might be fine for SE traffic or something, but I would picture TGP surfers scanning the pics, hovering their mouse over them 'til they realized there were no full-size images, and 20 seconds later, having not read a word of text, closed the wind0w to go to the next gallery. Overall I like the designs but they seem to be relying almost entirely on the images to make the sale. I'd balance the sales pitch between images and copy a bit more.

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05-14-2004, 03:22 AM	#9
Merrioc Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2003 Posts: 249	both designs could work, the second one I don't really like but it could work. The first design is okay but it needs a clean up, but its a good start. the other problem, those side thumbs are nice, but put them as a solid image or at least in small groups, your taking up WAY to much space, your main page is 1.14 megs, thats really heavy for a first page, should try and keep it under 700k. your average 56k user is gonna have to wait 4 minutes to just for the page to load (not nearly as many of those around) a slow cable user might wait 2 minutes. you want a finer critque hit me on ICQ 11-44-63-05

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05-14-2004, 03:29 AM	#11
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