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Esbee · 05-13-2004, 11:45 PM

I like the first one. The pink bars with the white text blend straight into the design - I'd switch those bars up to contrast versus the pink and stand out - else almost no one's gonna read the message. Also not sure if it's not optimized yet, or if you're looking at broadbanders only, but it's frickin' 1.2 meg. Yikes.

Also, those girls have penises.

Second one really needs a way to promote the sales text. So many pics to draw the eyes around the page - but all the text is so small I can't see the eyes ever making it back to to read anything. Might be fine for SE traffic or something, but I would picture TGP surfers scanning the pics, hovering their mouse over them 'til they realized there were no full-size images, and 20 seconds later, having not read a word of text, closed the wind0w to go to the next gallery.

Overall I like the designs but they seem to be relying almost entirely on the images to make the sale. I'd balance the sales pitch between images and copy a bit more.

05-13-2004, 11:45 PM
Esbee Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Northern CA Posts: 109	I like the first one. The pink bars with the white text blend straight into the design - I'd switch those bars up to contrast versus the pink and stand out - else almost no one's gonna read the message. Also not sure if it's not optimized yet, or if you're looking at broadbanders only, but it's frickin' 1.2 meg. Yikes. Also, those girls have penises. Second one really needs a way to promote the sales text. So many pics to draw the eyes around the page - but all the text is so small I can't see the eyes ever making it back to to read anything. Might be fine for SE traffic or something, but I would picture TGP surfers scanning the pics, hovering their mouse over them 'til they realized there were no full-size images, and 20 seconds later, having not read a word of text, closed the wind0w to go to the next gallery. Overall I like the designs but they seem to be relying almost entirely on the images to make the sale. I'd balance the sales pitch between images and copy a bit more.