What do you think of my new design? Opinions needed! - GoFuckYourself.com

Rhino22 · 04-21-2004, 07:39 PM

Okay, so i'm working on a design for my web site... it hasn't launched yet.

I want my fellow GFY'ers to check it out and tell me what you think

. Too cluttered? Shitty colors? Any feedback would be great! Thanks!!!!!!

http://www.mirautosales.com/rhino22/index2.html

PornoMan · 04-21-2004, 07:41 PM

it's ok

reynold · 04-21-2004, 07:42 PM

I'd say it lacks some colors. Looks good enough but you still have to make some adjustments. Good luck!

Rhino22 · 04-21-2004, 07:44 PM

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Originally posted by reynold
I'd say it lacks some colors. Looks good enough but you still have to make some adjustments. Good luck!

I'm freaking clueless as to what color the background should be on it... any suggestions? What would look good on that background?

dunefield · 04-21-2004, 07:44 PM

it's not too bad... but the colour theme doesn't make anything stand out...

Rhino22 · 04-21-2004, 07:46 PM

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Originally posted by dunefield
it's not too bad... but the colour theme doesn't make anything stand out...

Okay, im gonna mess with the color right now!
I don't like it much either

Spud · 04-21-2004, 07:47 PM

over I likes. 2 comments though.
1. at the top, "RHINO22PRODUCTIONS" could sand out a bit more
2. "FEATURES OF THE MONTH" and SEASON ONE" don't really fit with the design.

I like the text/colors of FORUM TALK.

r0nin · 04-21-2004, 07:52 PM

the overall design looks quite good man

but i'll correct a few things:
1. the rhino logo doesn't look very clean, sharpen it a bit, or make it in vectors and in a plain black color, dunno play a bit with it, it doesn't look good.
2. i'll justify the text from the left on the 'big project' part. also there i'll do something with the text and sections, they look too close, change the font there, get rid of that shadow on the text, balance it with the section below (forum talk and what's going on)

add a hahahahahahahahahaha to preload the rollovers

"!-- Browser Detective - Protected Source Code --
!-- Your IP Address Is Being Logged! --"

scary, lol

Rhino22 · 04-21-2004, 07:53 PM

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Originally posted by r0nin
the overall design looks quite good man

but i'll correct a few things:
1. the rhino logo doesn't look very clean, sharpen it a bit, or make it in vectors and in a plain black color, dunno play a bit with it, it doesn't look good.
2. i'll justify the text from the left on the 'big project' part. also there i'll do something with the text and sections, they look too close, change the font there, get rid of that shadow on the text, balance it with the section below (forum talk and what's going on)

add a hahahahahahahahahaha to preload the rollovers

"!-- Browser Detective - Protected Source Code --
!-- Your IP Address Is Being Logged! --"

scary, lol

Good tips!

So what do you mean about the proload the rollovers? Should I turn that off? To tell you the truth, I'm not exactly sure what the preload rollovers does...

Thanks!

r0nin · 04-21-2004, 07:58 PM

u've got image rollovers on the navigation menu, i'm on a 512kb line so i don't see much difference, but most other surfers will, when u pass the mouse pointer over them the image changes, adding a js preloader to those images will make it smoother, this js will load the images before the whole page is displayed, if the size of the images is low it won't take more than a few seconds, save 'em as .gif to make 'em even smaller

Rhino22 · 04-21-2004, 08:01 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by r0nin
u've got image rollovers on the navigation menu, i'm on a 512kb line so i don't see much difference, but most other surfers will, when u pass the mouse pointer over them the image changes, adding a js preloader to those images will make it smoother, this js will load the images before the whole page is displayed, if the size of the images is low it won't take more than a few seconds, save 'em as .gif to make 'em even smaller

were do i get a js preloader from?

WebTitan · 04-21-2004, 08:57 PM

i like the layout, that is nice and clean

i think that maybe the blue needs something to break it up a bit?

AlienQ - BANNED FOR LIFE · 04-21-2004, 09:01 PM

Whats it do?

Morgan · 04-21-2004, 09:03 PM

"forum" and "services" are too close together.

Rhino22 · 04-21-2004, 09:38 PM

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Originally posted by AlienQ
Whats it do?

whats what do?

04-21-2004, 07:39 PM	#1
Rhino22 Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Florida Posts: 2,288	What do you think of my new design? Opinions needed! Okay, so i'm working on a design for my web site... it hasn't launched yet. I want my fellow GFY'ers to check it out and tell me what you think . Too cluttered? Shitty colors? Any feedback would be great! Thanks!!!!!! http://www.mirautosales.com/rhino22/index2.html

04-21-2004, 07:44 PM	#5
dunefield www.barely18movies.com Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Melbourne, Australia Posts: 10,920	it's not too bad... but the colour theme doesn't make anything stand out... __________________

04-21-2004, 09:01 PM	#13
AlienQ - BANNED FOR LIFE best designer on GFY Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: IALIEN.COM - High Definition Video and Photographic Productions -ICQ 78943384 Posts: 30,307	Whats it do? __________________ NAKED HOSTING FTW!11 I'm On The INSANE PLAN $9.95/mo! \| The Alien Blog Adult News Worth Reading Updated Daily \| Content For Sale! 641 PICS 216 MINUTES OF VIDEO $350.00 \|ICQ: 78943384 \|

04-21-2004, 09:03 PM	#14
Morgan Too lazy to set a custom title Industry Role: Join Date: May 2002 Location: Corona Del Mar, CA Posts: 10,520	"forum" and "services" are too close together. __________________ PornstarPlatinum.com \| TransErotica.com

04-21-2004, 07:41 PM	#2
PornoMan Confirmed User Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Porn Land Posts: 168	it's ok

04-21-2004, 07:42 PM	#3
reynold Too lazy to set a custom title Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Global Traveler Posts: 51,271	I'd say it lacks some colors. Looks good enough but you still have to make some adjustments. Good luck!

04-21-2004, 07:47 PM	#7
Spud Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Seattle Posts: 340	over I likes. 2 comments though. 1. at the top, "RHINO22PRODUCTIONS" could sand out a bit more 2. "FEATURES OF THE MONTH" and SEASON ONE" don't really fit with the design. I like the text/colors of FORUM TALK.

04-21-2004, 07:52 PM	#8
r0nin Confirmed User Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 415	the overall design looks quite good man but i'll correct a few things: 1. the rhino logo doesn't look very clean, sharpen it a bit, or make it in vectors and in a plain black color, dunno play a bit with it, it doesn't look good. 2. i'll justify the text from the left on the 'big project' part. also there i'll do something with the text and sections, they look too close, change the font there, get rid of that shadow on the text, balance it with the section below (forum talk and what's going on) add a hahahahahahahahahaha to preload the rollovers "!-- Browser Detective - Protected Source Code -- !-- Your IP Address Is Being Logged! --" scary, lol

04-21-2004, 07:58 PM	#10
r0nin Confirmed User Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 415	u've got image rollovers on the navigation menu, i'm on a 512kb line so i don't see much difference, but most other surfers will, when u pass the mouse pointer over them the image changes, adding a js preloader to those images will make it smoother, this js will load the images before the whole page is displayed, if the size of the images is low it won't take more than a few seconds, save 'em as .gif to make 'em even smaller

04-21-2004, 08:57 PM	#12
WebTitan Confirmed User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Western NY Posts: 5,114	i like the layout, that is nice and clean i think that maybe the blue needs something to break it up a bit?