My first gallery try - GoFuckYourself.com

FunForOne · 03-20-2004, 08:02 PM

hey everyone, decided to make a gallery. This is my first try ever. I'm going by the theory of "less is more".

Please check it out and give me contructive critisism!

Almostplaymates.com

thanks in advance!

Spunky · 03-20-2004, 08:05 PM

Get rid of that text up top and place the banner lower on the page

SureFire · 03-20-2004, 08:06 PM

Not bad but you probably will have better luck with that style promoting amateur sites.

jact · 03-20-2004, 08:07 PM

Thumbs are hazy, layout isn't drawing their eye to anywhere specific and content looks like cheap ol' magazine scans instead of Playboy material. Start there.

FunForOne · 03-20-2004, 08:07 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by spunky1
Get rid of that text up top and place the banner lower on the page

NO text at all?

TheMob · 03-20-2004, 08:08 PM

i love that girl

tgpmakers · 03-20-2004, 08:10 PM

get rid of the empty box's apart from that not bad at all for a begginer get it submitted and see how it does.

Spunky · 03-20-2004, 08:11 PM

The layout doesn't seem quite right...text is good but they will bypass the banner sitting up top .I suggest splitting up the pics and placeing a text description in the middle and the banner on the bottom

FunForOne · 03-20-2004, 08:15 PM

Advice taken,

I'm working on it now.

thanks again for all your advice!

Scherfi · 03-20-2004, 08:52 PM

you gonna get your ass to court with that domain

Pornopat · 03-21-2004, 05:56 AM

The images you are using are terribly heavy....
140 kb is a little expensive on your bw bill.
You might want to aim at like 50 kb.

Head your ass over to other webmaterboards like newbiewebmasters or cozy frog and read all about it there.

Pornopat · 03-21-2004, 05:58 AM

Oh and that big pic in the middle is what is being called a "blind link'"
You will get rejected at a majority of tgp's for that.

Manowar · 03-21-2004, 06:01 AM

the boxes are kind of annoying , as is the blind link.

I think some of the good gallery designers here could help you start making quality ones

Kicker · 03-21-2004, 06:33 AM

Good content

03-21-2004, 06:57 AM

Nice content.

Trippekdick · 03-21-2004, 06:59 AM

good job =)

03-20-2004, 08:02 PM	#1
FunForOne Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: USA Posts: 8,704	My first gallery try hey everyone, decided to make a gallery. This is my first try ever. I'm going by the theory of "less is more". Please check it out and give me contructive critisism! Almostplaymates.com thanks in advance!

03-20-2004, 08:05 PM	#2
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03-20-2004, 08:07 PM	#4
jact Confirmed User Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: Oakville, Canada Posts: 9,134	Thumbs are hazy, layout isn't drawing their eye to anywhere specific and content looks like cheap ol' magazine scans instead of Playboy material. Start there. __________________ Free agent

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03-20-2004, 08:11 PM	#8
Spunky I need a beer Industry Role: Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: ♠ Toiletville ♠ Posts: 133,944	The layout doesn't seem quite right...text is good but they will bypass the banner sitting up top .I suggest splitting up the pics and placeing a text description in the middle and the banner on the bottom __________________ *YOUR INFORMATION HERE*

03-20-2004, 08:06 PM	#3
SureFire Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: internet Posts: 4,398	Not bad but you probably will have better luck with that style promoting amateur sites.

03-20-2004, 08:08 PM	#6
TheMob Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: 2006 Posts: 8,584	i love that girl

03-20-2004, 08:15 PM	#9
FunForOne Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: USA Posts: 8,704	Advice taken, I'm working on it now. thanks again for all your advice!

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03-21-2004, 06:01 AM	#13
Manowar jellyfish Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 71,528	the boxes are kind of annoying , as is the blind link. I think some of the good gallery designers here could help you start making quality ones

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