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newbreed · 02-05-2004, 08:06 PM

ArikaAmes.com - Almost ready to go.

Looking for some feedback on this index page. Anyone have a minute to take a looky we would appreciate it very much!

Nothing other than the index page is up, so no links yet.

Also we are looking for a couple of beta testers to poke around the site when we are ready to go live. Anyone that can help us with that please hit us up...

Thanks,
Bill and Arika
ICQ# 346940591

Keev · 02-05-2004, 08:29 PM

I had the pleasure of meeting erika in vegas ( you know the TALL guy) anyways I think the site is ok but she should have a better designed site! she has alot more to offer surfers than the design implies!

Kevin
www.TNVCash.com

powerbubba · 02-05-2004, 08:46 PM

looks pretty good, good luck!

newbreed · 02-05-2004, 08:48 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Keev
I had the pleasure of meeting erika in vegas ( you know the TALL guy) anyways I think the site is ok but she should have a better designed site! she has alot more to offer surfers than the design implies!

Kevin
www.TNVCash.com

Hey Kevin, this is Arika. Thanks for checking it out! We have only put a few hours into it at this point, so we are not quite done. We just wanted to not go overboard on the design in the first couple of pages. Me and Bill are just trying to get something up at this point because we got busy on the other program and let my site go on the back burner. Looking forward to hearing from you guys again soon!

Arika

newbreed · 02-05-2004, 08:49 PM

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Originally posted by powerbubba
looks pretty good, good luck!

Thanks Bubba!

I am so new at this still. Design is not my best skill...yet...lol...

BobChezule · 02-05-2004, 09:12 PM

The design looks pretty good, although I would change the font of the opening description. I found it just slightly difficult to make out, and it should be simple to read. It's not professional looking, but it shouldn't be, so I like it.

RRACY · 02-05-2004, 09:36 PM

It looks like the large photo is airbrushed

I would make to make very amateur in it's design style. I would go for something like www.tiffanyteen.com

newbreed · 02-05-2004, 09:36 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by BobChezule
The design looks pretty good, although I would change the font of the opening description. I found it just slightly difficult to make out, and it should be simple to read. It's not professional looking, but it shouldn't be, so I like it.

Thanks so much Bob

We agree 100% about the font. I got a new computer and have not transferred all of his fonts over to it yet. Not sure what I actually want that opening to say yet either, just trying different things out for now. I have looked at some other girls' sites for some ideas, but haven't made a final decision. I want to keep it kind of short, but also fill up some page space...

Keep 'em coming everyone!!!

RRACY · 02-05-2004, 09:45 PM

I meant to say, keep it simple in the design. Most sites are flashy on the tour and when you get in it's shit photography. She looks like the girl next door which will have broad appeal if presented right. Good luck.

Jamdin · 02-05-2004, 09:47 PM

I agree with BobChezule about not being able to read the description.

SCOOTER · 02-05-2004, 09:52 PM

Looks good Bill

newbreed · 02-05-2004, 10:19 PM

Thanks you everyone so much! We will be working on the site through the nite, and I will change the front page in a little bit. Trying to get some tour pages done so we can launch this thing finally!!!

AMN · 02-23-2004, 02:14 AM

Hey Bill and Erika hows the site coming ?

BlackHole · 02-23-2004, 02:16 AM

Looks nice.. I'd hit it.

digifan · 02-23-2004, 02:46 AM

Loaded very slow for me...

Trax · 02-23-2004, 02:51 AM

loads very slow and what are "memebers"?

02-05-2004, 08:06 PM	#1
newbreed Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: ThatOneProgram.com Posts: 9,898	Index page critique please (For ArikaAmes.com) ArikaAmes.com - Almost ready to go. Looking for some feedback on this index page. Anyone have a minute to take a looky we would appreciate it very much! Nothing other than the index page is up, so no links yet. Also we are looking for a couple of beta testers to poke around the site when we are ready to go live. Anyone that can help us with that please hit us up... Thanks, Bill and Arika ICQ# 346940591

02-05-2004, 08:29 PM	#2
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02-05-2004, 08:46 PM	#3
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02-05-2004, 09:12 PM	#6
BobChezule Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: New York Posts: 779	The design looks pretty good, although I would change the font of the opening description. I found it just slightly difficult to make out, and it should be simple to read. It's not professional looking, but it shouldn't be, so I like it.

02-05-2004, 09:36 PM	#7
RRACY Confirmed User Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 1,393	It looks like the large photo is airbrushed I would make to make very amateur in it's design style. I would go for something like www.tiffanyteen.com

02-05-2004, 09:45 PM	#9
RRACY Confirmed User Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 1,393	I meant to say, keep it simple in the design. Most sites are flashy on the tour and when you get in it's shit photography. She looks like the girl next door which will have broad appeal if presented right. Good luck.

02-05-2004, 09:47 PM	#10
Jamdin Registered User Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: Kansas Posts: 3,560	I agree with BobChezule about not being able to read the description.

02-05-2004, 10:19 PM	#12
newbreed Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: ThatOneProgram.com Posts: 9,898	Thanks you everyone so much! We will be working on the site through the nite, and I will change the front page in a little bit. Trying to get some tour pages done so we can launch this thing finally!!!

02-23-2004, 02:14 AM	#13
AMN Registered User Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Las vegas, NV Posts: 97	Hey Bill and Erika hows the site coming ?

02-23-2004, 02:16 AM	#14
BlackHole So Fucking Banned Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: ¨¨¨¨¨¨¨¨¨¨¨¨¨ Posts: 8361 Posts: 129	Looks nice.. I'd hit it.

02-23-2004, 02:51 AM	#16
Trax [----------------------] Join Date: Aug 2001 Posts: 14,486	loads very slow and what are "memebers"?