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07-11-2020, 09:34 PM
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Does this trailer with intro/outro confuse you?
I was messing around in Final Cut Pro with a some music I purchased and after a few days, I ended up having what I think is a pretty intense "intro to phil-flash.com bumper" and a fun and unique "outro bumper".
Does this video make sense to you after watching it? Intro, Trailer, Outro or do you feel confused? The video --> https://teenkasia.com/latest-updates/001/free-gallery/ |
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07-11-2020, 09:51 PM
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The intro is a bit large, and the users wanna see the models getting naked or an interview. Jus my two cents
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07-12-2020, 02:04 AM
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Bye - Left to do stuff
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Score 3/10 max
To long, music dont fit, to bland and standard effects. You need to work on your digital brand identity, but it takes marketing skills, rather then editing skils. So I suggest you hire someone to do it. Pornhub and Brazzers are exampels of those that have dont it right |
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07-12-2020, 08:04 AM
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1) Good looking models ( a rarity now days and the strongest element of the clip)
 2) Good "driving" music. 3) Very slow loading 4) Editing is a mess and yes it is very confusing 5) Voice over sucks 6) The "flashes" are disturbing.... 7) The clip does NOT know what it is selling. 8) to long and silly dialogue like " How is your English" 9) Each clip and format seems to have different source. 10) some really bad shots with a wobbly camera moves. Solutions: 1) Decide what you want to accomplish. IE: promote each girl . 2) select only the best footage of each and avoid bad sound effects 3) set it to music 4) Avoid 1 to 10) above |
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07-12-2020, 08:11 AM
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So Fucking Banned
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Damn those girls are immortal.
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07-12-2020, 01:52 PM
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Wow... I thought it was pretty cool. I knew it might have been a long intro... but it felt like this is good stuff... show me more. And a user would not mind waiting for the Teen Kasia trailer part.
I can easily remove the intro and go straight to the trailer portion. Do more of you think it’s horrible... or was it just the three ppl above? |
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07-12-2020, 01:55 PM
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Marketing... when you say this, are you talking about ad spots and emailers etc? Focus on that rather than a “trailer intro bumper”? I am a bit confused... |
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07-12-2020, 03:31 PM
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Converting like it's 1999
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Always the hottest girls.. I enjoyed it,bit thats not to say you cant do better
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07-13-2020, 04:59 AM
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. . .That video it's a bloody mess . . .
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07-13-2020, 06:03 AM
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Too lazy to wipe my ass
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The bit that jumps out at me, is at 1.41 where you say 'The next 4 minutes are for members only'...
4 mins? I wouldnt have that a selling point. If I'm gonna join a site, then the videos had better be a bit longer than four minutes long. Especially as its 2020 and I can watch hour long videos for free on every tube out there. I mean sure, if its just 4 mins long then its just 4 mins long - But I wouldn't use that to get a sale - Id just say Join to see the rest of the video... etc... |
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07-15-2020, 05:33 PM
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Well... I still like the intro. I gave it a new home. phil-flash.com about section.
The Kasia trailer, I removed the intro now it’s just her trailer with the “techno/metal” outro. Thanks for the critiques... even though most of them I disagreed with... lol. I did change the text that CurrentlySober” suggested though. If you are new to this thread, the Teen Kasia trailer used to have my about phil-flash video as a super long intro... https://phil-flash.com (about section) https://teenkasia.com/latest-updates/001/free-gallery/ |
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07-16-2020, 12:51 AM
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Too lazy to set a custom title
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yes it's confusing:
long post i don't wanna write but you need to get rid of opening scene, starting at .12 will explain the language issue + point of video. I would remove the middle as the 'bye' + no content makes it seem like that is the end of the video. Outro is ok but text is very 00's ahh you already updated, i need to check dates |
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