1) Good looking models ( a rarity now days and the strongest element of the clip)

2) Good "driving" music.
3) Very slow loading
4) Editing is a mess and yes it is very confusing
5) Voice over sucks
6) The "flashes" are disturbing....
7) The clip does NOT know what it is selling.
8) to long and silly dialogue like " How is your English"
9) Each clip and format seems to have different source.
10) some really bad shots with a wobbly camera moves.
Solutions:
1) Decide what you want to accomplish. IE: promote each girl .
2) select only the best footage of each and avoid bad sound effects
3) set it to music
4) Avoid 1 to 10) above
