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XSpider · 03-30-2003, 03:18 PM

I promote clubseventeen and the rebills are awesome but the tour isn't that good so i decided to make my own tour... well, i'm not that good in designs so please state your opinion about my first page:
http://www.adult-cinemas.com/testtour/index.html

Thx!

gezzed · 03-30-2003, 03:20 PM

You'v really got the innocent teen theme down Xspider, that's for sure. I'm no graphic expert, but the chick doesn't do anything for me, so I doubt a surfer would be tripping over himself to find his credit card.

But, overall, it's quite decent.

XSpider · 03-30-2003, 03:29 PM

how is it if you compare it to their regular tour first page (please note that i am going to insert the latestmovie updates below that splash part)
http://www.clubseventeen.com

gezzed · 03-30-2003, 03:32 PM

Their tour does have much nicer looking girls, although their design looks quite amateurish. I can see why you wanted to design your own tour, but maybe you should consider using a sponsor with a better looking site for the teen niche?

XSpider · 03-30-2003, 03:34 PM

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Originally posted by gezzed
Their tour does have much nicer looking girls, although their design looks quite amateurish. I can see why you wanted to design your own tour, but maybe you should consider using a sponsor with a better looking site for the teen niche?

Because the rebills........ they have a great live chat of their own wich blasts those rebills up...... once the member is in he stays in but the trick is to get him in lol

XSpider · 03-30-2003, 04:28 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by gezzed
Their tour does have much nicer looking girls, although their design looks quite amateurish. I can see why you wanted to design your own tour, but maybe you should consider using a sponsor with a better looking site for the teen niche?

Ok, i added the two girls getting the facial from their first page, is this any better or worth trying it out:
http://www.adult-cinemas.com/testtour/index2.html

Opinions please, much appreciated!

Kohun · 03-30-2003, 04:33 PM

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Originally posted by XSpider

Ok, i added the two girls getting the facial from their first page, is this any better or worth trying it out:
http://www.adult-cinemas.com/testtour/index2.html

Opinions please, much appreciated!

Much better, only one point - you need add some text about your site

03-30-2003, 05:14 PM

are they allowed to put pics of 17 year old girls on the net?

Gutterboy · 03-30-2003, 05:16 PM

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Originally posted by XSpider

Because the rebills........ they have a great live chat of their own wich blasts those rebills up...... once the member is in he stays in but the trick is to get him in lol

I used to promote them and I agree. Their members area is the best I've ever seen on a teen site.

03-30-2003, 05:17 PM

are they allowed to put pics of 17 year old girls on the net?

They are 18 or older. Their name is deceiving.

mrthumbs · 03-30-2003, 05:24 PM

XSpider · 03-31-2003, 02:04 AM

Ok, added the third version, please your comments!
http://www.adult-cinemas.com/testtour/index3.html

03-30-2003, 03:18 PM	#1
XSpider Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Belgium Posts: 356	Opinions about this page.... I promote clubseventeen and the rebills are awesome but the tour isn't that good so i decided to make my own tour... well, i'm not that good in designs so please state your opinion about my first page: http://www.adult-cinemas.com/testtour/index.html Thx! __________________ XSpider

03-30-2003, 03:29 PM	#3
XSpider Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Belgium Posts: 356	how is it if you compare it to their regular tour first page (please note that i am going to insert the latestmovie updates below that splash part) http://www.clubseventeen.com __________________ XSpider

03-30-2003, 05:17 PM	#10
evildick Guest Posts: n/a	are they allowed to put pics of 17 year old girls on the net? They are 18 or older. Their name is deceiving. Last edited by evildick; 03-30-2003 at 05:26 PM..

03-31-2003, 02:04 AM	#12
XSpider Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Belgium Posts: 356	Ok, added the third version, please your comments! http://www.adult-cinemas.com/testtour/index3.html __________________ XSpider

03-30-2003, 03:20 PM	#2
gezzed Confirmed User Join Date: Mar 2002 Posts: 317	You'v really got the innocent teen theme down Xspider, that's for sure. I'm no graphic expert, but the chick doesn't do anything for me, so I doubt a surfer would be tripping over himself to find his credit card. But, overall, it's quite decent.

03-30-2003, 03:32 PM	#4
gezzed Confirmed User Join Date: Mar 2002 Posts: 317	Their tour does have much nicer looking girls, although their design looks quite amateurish. I can see why you wanted to design your own tour, but maybe you should consider using a sponsor with a better looking site for the teen niche?

03-30-2003, 05:14 PM	#8
buddyjuf Guest Posts: n/a	are they allowed to put pics of 17 year old girls on the net?

03-30-2003, 05:24 PM	#11
mrthumbs salad tossing sig guy Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: mrthumbs*gmail.com Posts: 11,702