Opinions about this page....
 

I promote clubseventeen and the rebills are awesome but the tour isn't that good so i decided to make my own tour... well, i'm not that good in designs so please state your opinion about my first page:
http://www.adult-cinemas.com/testtour/index.html

Thx!

You'v really got the innocent teen theme down Xspider, that's for sure. I'm no graphic expert, but the chick doesn't do anything for me, so I doubt a surfer would be tripping over himself to find his credit card.

But, overall, it's quite decent.

how is it if you compare it to their regular tour first page (please note that i am going to insert the latestmovie updates below that splash part)
http://www.clubseventeen.com

Their tour does have much nicer looking girls, although their design looks quite amateurish. I can see why you wanted to design your own tour, but maybe you should consider using a sponsor with a better looking site for the teen niche?

Because the rebills........ they have a great live chat of their own wich blasts those rebills up...... once the member is in he stays in but the trick is to get him in lol

Ok, i added the two girls getting the facial from their first page, is this any better or worth trying it out:
http://www.adult-cinemas.com/testtour/index2.html

Opinions please, much appreciated!

Much better, only one point - you need add some text about your site

are they allowed to put pics of 17 year old girls on the net?

I used to promote them and I agree. Their members area is the best I've ever seen on a teen site.

are they allowed to put pics of 17 year old girls on the net?

They are 18 or older. Their name is deceiving.

Ok, added the third version, please your comments!
http://www.adult-cinemas.com/testtour/index3.html