Gallery Feedback Needed - GoFuckYourself.com

lil2rich4u2 · 03-09-2003, 08:58 PM

Ok im trying to add "sales text" and couldnt really think of which route to follow, so i coppied text from the sponsor tour.

I really dont like doing this, because then he see's the same text if/when he takes the tour.

What can i do to spice it up?

http://www.pleasuredvds.com/gallerie...air/index.html

Any other feedback is more than welcome

P.S dont bother telling me to drop the price in the join msg, i did that for a reason. Thanks.

stocktrader23 · 03-09-2003, 09:11 PM

1. Larger text, that shit hurt my eyes.
2. How hard should it be to write original text for a redheads site?

Vox · 03-09-2003, 09:17 PM

Get larger text, I had problems reading it.
Your images are too large, 150k images are a waste of BW.

Theo · 03-09-2003, 09:19 PM

Never mention the trial price in such pages, unless the whole page is one huge promo which gives a complete view about the paysite the surfers are about to join (something that does not happen here)

Increase the size of the fonts and of the promo link. Regarding the text,something more creative might work.

bawdy · 03-09-2003, 09:19 PM

if u r going to have that text box why not tell a story about how she just shaved her pussy and would u like to have a look etc....

Interlude · 03-09-2003, 09:50 PM

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Originally posted by bawdy
if u r going to have that text box why not tell a story about how she just shaved her pussy and would u like to have a look etc....

It amazes me that that would work with TGP surfers... most are more savvy than your average porn viewer. All I can picture is some fat nasty old bastard webmaster sitting behind his computer typing that paragraph, thinking "ahh hells yeah, I'm gonna make the $$$MAD BILLZ$$$ with this shit!"

bawdy · 03-09-2003, 10:06 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Interlude
It amazes me that that would work with TGP surfers... most are more savvy than your average porn viewer. All I can picture is some fat nasty old bastard webmaster sitting behind his computer typing that paragraph, thinking "ahh hells yeah, I'm gonna make the $$$MAD BILLZ$$$ with this shit!"

works for the phone sex companies

bawdy · 03-09-2003, 10:07 PM

oh and sleazydream

03-09-2003, 08:58 PM	#1
lil2rich4u2 ICQ: 175171926 Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: New York, NY Posts: 11,046	Gallery Feedback Needed Ok im trying to add "sales text" and couldnt really think of which route to follow, so i coppied text from the sponsor tour. I really dont like doing this, because then he see's the same text if/when he takes the tour. What can i do to spice it up? http://www.pleasuredvds.com/gallerie...air/index.html Any other feedback is more than welcome P.S dont bother telling me to drop the price in the join msg, i did that for a reason. Thanks. __________________ HEY!! Unbeatable hosting! Customer service is top notch! --> ISPrime <-- Do a search on any board, their reputation is rock solid .. for years!!

03-09-2003, 09:11 PM	#2
stocktrader23 Let's do some business. Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: The dirty south. Posts: 18,781	1. Larger text, that shit hurt my eyes. 2. How hard should it be to write original text for a redheads site? __________________ Hands Free Adult - Join Once, Earn For Life "I try to make a habit of bouncing my eyes up to the face of a beautiful woman, and often repeat “not mine” in my head or even verbally. She’s not mine. God has her set aside. She’s not mine. She’s His little girl, and she needs me to fight for her by keeping my eyes where they should be."

03-09-2003, 09:17 PM	#3
Vox Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Montreal Posts: 2,710	Get larger text, I had problems reading it. Your images are too large, 150k images are a waste of BW. __________________ Social profile assassination for hire

03-09-2003, 09:19 PM	#4
Theo HAL 9000 Industry Role: Join Date: May 2001 Posts: 34,515	Never mention the trial price in such pages, unless the whole page is one huge promo which gives a complete view about the paysite the surfers are about to join (something that does not happen here) Increase the size of the fonts and of the promo link. Regarding the text,something more creative might work.

03-09-2003, 09:19 PM	#5
bawdy Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2002 Posts: 1,424	if u r going to have that text box why not tell a story about how she just shaved her pussy and would u like to have a look etc....

03-09-2003, 10:07 PM	#8
bawdy Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2002 Posts: 1,424	oh and sleazydream