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  • FunForOne
    Confirmed User
    • Nov 2003
    • 8704

    #1

    New Gallery

    Hello,

    Check out my very first attempt at a gallery.
    I am attempting to promote playboy cash.

    www.almostplaymates.com


    I'm aware that the pictures are a little fuzzy, I should have that corrected very soon.

    Please give constructive critisism.
  • Towser
    Confirmed User
    • Aug 2003
    • 107

    #2
    your link doesnt work

    as far as the site goes, im sorry but it is pretty bad.

    red, white and black + times new roman text is not going to excite many people in my opinion. And your logo is REALLY bad!

    I think you should start again. look at the site you are trying to promote and see why that works so well. If you cant make it 10 times better then pay someone else to do it

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    • FunForOne
      Confirmed User
      • Nov 2003
      • 8704

      #3
      Advice taken. I guess I'm going to have to buy a logo. Any suggestion on someone that does that?

      I have put up a new one, please check it out again and let me know what you think.


      Almostplaymates.com


      thanks in advance and remember, this is my first try!

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      • zentz
        Confirmed User
        • Nov 2003
        • 8062

        #4
        i will make you simple templates for 5$
        Programs that owe me money ---- Epassporte.com ~ $2700 | Protraffic.com ~ $2600 | XonDemand.com ~ $3000

        Email: [email protected]

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        • Towser
          Confirmed User
          • Aug 2003
          • 107

          #5
          ok, your colour choice is much better

          the thumbnail quality is fine, however, will the main pics be of better quality? it will be bad news if not.

          the main logo is obviously still very poor! get yourself some good software and try again. be carefull if you decide to pay for a logo design as there are a LOT of scam artists in this biz!

          i also think you should align the text in the centre, and make the

          PLAYBOY
          PLUS

          smaller!

          show me again when you have done that!

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