newb needs constructive criticism on blog

[evolmachine]

hi, im rather new to this community and would like some constructive criticism regarding my blog. click my sig for my blog.

[Babaganoosh]

First, fix your sig.
http://www.gofuckyourself.com/gfy_faqs.html

I don't see a blog in your sig either. I see what looks like a TGP running on blog software. That still makes it a TGP. Blogs work because of unique, keyword rich text. Dump your current format and do some writing.

[ez12]

So whats the url of your blog?

[evolmachine]

evolmachine.com

[phoqu]

Nice - I see you modified the new-york WP theme ;-) Nothing wrong with, that but if you don't want to give them credit take out their comments from the CSS and change the folder names :-) Also, set up your rewrite rules properly so URLs have page/2 or some-unique-title instead of ?paged=2. I like the overall simplicity of the site - maybe add more posts/images per page though. Oh, and maybe link to staggstreet dot com too - the photographer for that site is on here. Overall, it looks good; i like the content (images); you should configure the wordpress instance more though.

^ my late-night drunken brain fart;

[stonehammer]

first u need to know whats a blog

[phoqu]

first u need to know whats a blog

Arguably, it is a blog. It's all Wordpress on the back end...

[ThePornCrawler]

maybe you can add more videos per page instead of 9. i like the template though

[Xer0]

Nice clean layout. Remember to link exchange with your niche!

[Babaganoosh]

Arguably, it is a blog. It's all Wordpress on the back end...

Running Wordpress doesn't mean you have a blog. He obviously has a TGP running on blog software using a free theme that he removed the credits for.

Really, using the theme without giving credit is a douche move.

[evolmachine]

ive added credit for the theme... and ok its a tgp...

thanks phoqu for the help... im changing the rewrite rules... and checking out staggstreet
again thanks alot

[brassmonkey]

yep looks good i was expecting videos when i clicked a pic

[HomerSimpson]

looks good

yep looks good i was expecting videos when i clicked a pic

yeah same in here...
looks like a tube but it isn't