How does it look?

[AsianJenny]

Hey All,

Ok, i have been tweaking the 2 thumb pages I have made to submit to TGPs, but would like your feedback on them now.

There are 2 pages..

#1 (only the first row of pics work)
Page 1

#2
Page 2

Are they any good? Would they get on TGPs out there? What do you think I need to fix up, add, remove?

lol, take it easy on me This is the first site I am doing. And yes, I am going after the non-pro looking type of site. And yup, thats me

Jenny

[Darkhorse]

Hi Jenny, a few things you need to do.

(first gallery)

Add some keywords to your Meta Tags, add some descriptions to your pics (good for SE's)

Next, try to layout your pics in series. You have nude to non-nude and so forth.

You have a total of 6 outgoing links, the norm is 1 per 5 thumbnails.

And last, I am getting 404's when clicking on the thumbs not good.

The second gallery is pretty much the same as the first.

Overall it looks pretty good, but you need to look at a few things before you start submitting.

Good luck