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  • littledragon
    Registered User
    • May 2005
    • 33
    #1

    Criticisms wanted

    Just want some opinions on http://www.thesmutguide.com

    What can I do to improve it, is it too crowded? Too many ads? Should I move some things around? Things like that... Much appreciated
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    • lacuna
      Confirmed User
      • Mar 2006
      • 1950
      #2
      Hi Dragon,

      IMHO, you have too much text and too much whitespace. I'd get rid of the top left text box and chop the "what's new" section waaaaaay down (actually, I'd probably kill that too). Take a step back, pretend it's not your site, and look at it from the surfer's point of view.

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        • MCRiv
          Confirmed User
          • Jun 2007
          • 343
          #3
          Site Criticism

          I would change the the yellow parts to a different color maybe light blue which is easier on the eyes. Go to webdesign.org and read the tutorial on color theory. I would put some gradients on the page too. Make it the same color as Yahoo.com mybe. It is the #1 site in the world and if you notice it resembes a blue sky a little.

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            • MCRiv
              Confirmed User
              • Jun 2007
              • 343
              #4
              I would take the banner out the black area and put it right under the whats new and cut the what's new size in half. Then I would fill the black area on top with a graphic and logo for your site.

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                • amateurcanada
                  Confirmed User
                  • Jul 2001
                  • 3766
                  #5
                  I'd first add in content from our partner program!

                  I agree with MCRIV, im on a 24" widescreen LCD and that yellowish/orange really burnt me and turned me off. Chill on the text up top, get rid of the job wanted stuff as your selling porn not yourself (hehe). There is no branding for you, when I click close, I wont remember your name - make a logo up or something to brand your name, as just a banner isnt much.

                  Use prettier banners, the "FREE PORN" in blue and black is ancient.

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                    • CaptainHowdy
                      Too lazy to set a custom title
                      • Dec 2004
                      • 94731
                      #6
                      Needs a more inviting header...

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                        • testpie
                          Mostly retired
                          • Apr 2006
                          • 3231
                          #7
                          Originally posted by littledragon
                          Just want some opinions on http://www.thesmutguide.com

                          What can I do to improve it, is it too crowded? Too many ads? Should I move some things around? Things like that... Much appreciated
                          I'm not a fan of the header having a black background, no logo and containing a banner advertisement, but that's the least of your worries:
                          Originally posted by http://www.thesmutguide.com
                          Copyright © 2007 KuntKetchup.com. All rights reserved..
                          Is KuntKetchup.com your other site, or have you just jacked the layout?

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                            • littledragon
                              Registered User
                              • May 2005
                              • 33
                              #8
                              Yeah, kuntketchup.com was my first site. Trying something new with this search engine.

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