Site critique please

[Ackeric]

Ok I will be launching in a few day. You guys/gals tell me what you think. Be honest I can take it.


roughtied.com

[Freedoom]

nice design No content? :S

[yahoo-xxx-girls.com]

Hi Ackeric

Black backgrounds are very hard to look at also your first page has way too much text for anyone to read when they are only looking for porn... Two short paragraphs should be used in your warning page at most !

Your second page graphic is out of focus. You need to use less of the darker graphics and colors... It's very hard to look at... most adult surfers will not continue past your first page and will be put off by the dark colors...

Good luck,

[Ackeric]

Thanks, The warning page is that long because to law dude said so, So I will error on the side caution. If someone can't scroll just a bit they aint going reach for there wallet any way. I think I want to lighten thing up a bit but still maintain the Scary look. I will play with it. Oh starting about 2 am EST a slightly reduced member area with out protection. It will be open for about 12 hours. Have a look

[falcao]

you need to make the pictures and text bigger. they are so small. the pictures are too small to grab anyone, and the text is too small to read for a long time. (well, it seems small because it's red on black.)

also, don't use promo/tour images with writing on them. that blunts the impact of the image.

your site doesn't say what it is: videos, photos or both? well, maybe somewhere in the text it does say, but i did what most porn surfers do: i didn't read any of the text. your site should be able to sell itself without relying on the text.

there are no full-size samples. there's no trailer video to show the resolution of your members' videos. there are no thumbs that blow up to full-size pictures. also, you don't say how much porn awaits inside. i'm a porn surfer, and i would never join a site without first seeing enough sample material to give me a really good idea of what i'm getting inside the members' area.

porn is competitive, and you really have to grab people and impress them if you want them to sign up.

[falcao]

Thanks, The warning page is that long because to law dude said so, So I will error on the side caution. If someone can't scroll just a bit they aint going reach for there wallet any way. I think I want to lighten thing up a bit but still maintain the Scary look. I will play with it. Oh starting about 2 am EST a slightly reduced member area with out protection. It will be open for about 12 hours. Have a look

why don't you put one non-adult bondage image on the front page? that should cancel out the negative effect of the long adult warning.

[30ceci]

Not bad! Would like to see more pix!

[Ackeric]

you need to make the pictures and text bigger. they are so small. the pictures are too small to grab anyone, and the text is too small to read for a long time. (well, it seems small because it's red on black.)

also, don't use promo/tour images with writing on them. that blunts the impact of the image.

your site doesn't say what it is: videos, photos or both? well, maybe somewhere in the text it does say, but i did what most porn surfers do: i didn't read any of the text. your site should be able to sell itself without relying on the text.

there are no full-size samples. there's no trailer video to show the resolution of your members' videos. there are no thumbs that blow up to full-size pictures. also, you don't say how much porn awaits inside. i'm a porn surfer, and i would never join a site without first seeing enough sample material to give me a really good idea of what i'm getting inside the members' area.

porn is competitive, and you really have to grab people and impress them if you want them to sign up.

Great ideas. I looked a the thing so long I started to miss the fact it does not say what I am selling. I put a preview button on the first page I do not really love the graphics but I will change that later. I am making the photos and text bigger (noobie css firefox/ie issue). Thanks for the input