Review site please

[Xavierz]

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Before I start I'd like to know what changes I should do to the site, I know changes need to be made here and there but im just having a mind block right now, I also want to write up some stuff but I suck when it comes to that too.... "Hi my name is julia blah blah"

Playfuljulia . com

[AdPatron]

http://www.PlayfulJulia.com

I would hire a designer.

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[Xavierz]

I'm pretty happy with the design for now, I just dont know what exactly to add to the tour, what should be within the join page and such

[JayLogic]

hmm, it seems that you have a really nice content there

but it's true you should hire a designer, I don't think that you'll make lots of sales with the current design, just my

if you'll need design, hit me up, I can help you with it

[wizard29]

congrats! I do agree with the design issue, the page just looks like it was made in an html editor or something. Good luck!

[PhoneBillOnline]

The design is too spartan for paysite.

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[HairToStay]

Well, why should I join, if I were a surfer? YOu have zero text selling me on Julia. Is she 18? 45? What does she do inside the members' area? Girl/Girl? Hardcore? Toys? Dogs?

For $25 a month how many photos do I get? How many videos? How often is the site updated? Is there any interaction with Julia? Does she do cam shows, and if so how often?

Hire a text-writing service if you can't write your own text.

The black/purple combo is too dark, it's has a Goth site feel to it.

[Freeze-Be]

Start with a new design then study what other paysites have on there pages.

Good luck!

[Xavierz]

Thanks everyone for the input

How much would I need to spend on this new deisgn? =/

I'm pretty swamped right now on cash, with getting more content of her, buying the server and all that...

[AdPatron]

I'm pretty happy with the design for now, I just dont know what exactly to add to the tour, what should be within the join page and such

You ask for a review, you get a review.

BTW, first thing I would do is change the colors.

[writersworld8]

not bad... goodluck!


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Thanks everyone for the input

How much would I need to spend on this new deisgn? =/

I'm pretty swamped right now on cash, with getting more content of her, buying the server and all that...

I can help you bro! Hit me up on ICQ sometime!

[Latinamistress]

I agree... Better design is much called for , but You're onto a good thing with 'Julia' A lot more information about Julia would be a good start ... Vital stats... sexual prefs... Not just skint student . Also any potential buyer doesn't actually know what they're getting , or how much they're paying until they actually click join! Most people will want to know this before agreeing to buy anything. Julia or no Julia. Best of luck, I'm sure with a better site design and some interesting text on Julia You will do great .