New Site Feedback please!

[demiworld]

Hi all

I have a new site at www.demi-world.com, I would appreciate any feedback on it ;o) (Improvements etc)

Thank You

Demi x

[ListYourPorn]

YOu have a whole buncj of errors on the page, you WM referal page needs some work as the text can not be read clearly

[demiworld]

What sort of errors?? Yes the text is not good on the wm referall page!

[cheque]

Why is the "Instant Credit Card Access" button smaller than the "Take the tour" and "Free Movies" button?

Make this button the same size as the other 2. It looks more conistent and why would you distract the attention from the "join" button.

[ChevyBalls]

Hi all

I have a new site at www.demi-world.com, I would appreciate any feedback on it ;o) (Improvements etc)

Thank You

Demi x

Hi Demi!

I see you have a few responses, and I haven't read any of them yet. When I give website feedback or a review, I like to enter in with a fresh mind, without some previous comment somehow lingering in the back of my mind.

Not only am I an adult webmaster, but I'm a big pervert as well. I always seem to have recurring charges hitting the card every month. So I am going to give you some feedback from a pervert's perspective. These are, after all, the guys that are going to be paying the bills.

I went to the front page of your site and immediately noticed that I am about to enter a site that deals in one of my favorite niche's, mature. My cock starts to get semi-hard as I click on the enter button from the warning page. I reach the next page, Page1.htm, and now my cock gets fully hard (not quite throbbing status) seeing that pic of you in black lingerie. That one pic alone contains several elements of my favorite niche's. Stockings, mature, big tits, and shaved. You are fucking hot, and I can't wait to move on and see what else you got!

I click on to take the tour. I notice on Tour1.htm a banner image on the bottom of the page that isn't coded properly. Not a big deal. I'm more concerned with your sex and cocksucking skills rather than you html knowledge.

Damn! I see that the thumbs in the left and right columns are not clickable. I was REALLY hoping for a full size pic preview so I could see the quality I will get if I join your website. Especially of that one on top left with you getting ready to devour that cock in your mouth. My cock just went semi soft at this point. I read and see you are going to give me years worth of pictures and they are in a "league of their own". It would be nice if you could prove it to me rather than me just having to take your word on it.

Okay, moving on and continuing tour. What? It's over...Nothing left to get my cock hard again, now it's in soft mode again. Pissing off the horny perverts won't make a sale.

You need to show me more of what I will get with my money if I join. How many pics? What are the resolutions on them? How is the full size quality? How many videos do you have? Are most of them hardcore? Are the videos split into parts and do I have the option of downloading the whole video file? Are the videos downloadable or just streaming? How many minutes average length are the movies?

I need two things before I sign up on your site. More details of what exactly I will get for my membership, and a hard throbbing cock. I'm sorry to say, but you failed in both areas.

Fix these things and I might come back if you ask nicely.

[Jim Neil]

Hi Demi!

I see you have a few responses, and I haven't read any of them yet. When I give website feedback or a review, I like to enter in with a fresh mind, without some previous comment somehow lingering in the back of my mind.

Not only am I an adult webmaster, but I'm a big pervert as well. I always seem to have recurring charges hitting the card every month. So I am going to give you some feedback from a pervert's perspective. These are, after all, the guys that are going to be paying the bills.

I went to the front page of your site and immediately noticed that I am about to enter a site that deals in one of my favorite niche's, mature. My cock starts to get semi-hard as I click on the enter button from the warning page. I reach the next page, Page1.htm, and now my cock gets fully hard (not quite throbbing status) seeing that pic of you in black lingerie. That one pic alone contains several elements of my favorite niche's. Stockings, mature, big tits, and shaved. You are fucking hot, and I can't wait to move on and see what else you got!

I click on to take the tour. I notice on Tour1.htm a banner image on the bottom of the page that isn't coded properly. Not a big deal. I'm more concerned with your sex and cocksucking skills rather than you html knowledge.

Damn! I see that the thumbs in the left and right columns are not clickable. I was REALLY hoping for a full size pic preview so I could see the quality I will get if I join your website. Especially of that one on top left with you getting ready to devour that cock in your mouth. My cock just went semi soft at this point. I read and see you are going to give me years worth of pictures and they are in a "league of their own". It would be nice if you could prove it to me rather than me just having to take your word on it.

Okay, moving on and continuing tour. What? It's over...Nothing left to get my cock hard again, now it's in soft mode again. Pissing off the horny perverts won't make a sale.

You need to show me more of what I will get with my money if I join. How many pics? What are the resolutions on them? How is the full size quality? How many videos do you have? Are most of them hardcore? Are the videos split into parts and do I have the option of downloading the whole video file? Are the videos downloadable or just streaming? How many minutes average length are the movies?

I need two things before I sign up on your site. More details of what exactly I will get for my membership, and a hard throbbing cock. I'm sorry to say, but you failed in both areas.

Fix these things and I might come back if you ask nicely.

Damn - that was alot of feedback...Are you an outsourced boardwhore ? :D

[demiworld]

Wow!

Now thats what I call feedback! I have fixed the points you mentioned, now go back and get that dick hard again!

[ChevyBalls]

Now thats what I call feedback! I have fixed the points you mentioned, now go back and get that dick hard again!

Hi Demi!

Oh man, so much better! Just left your site and my cock is still hard as I type this. I was hoping I could whack off to Free Movie 1, but at only 15 seconds, even I can last a bit longer than that. So the length of the "teaser" movies seem to be right on. You don't want your surfers cumming before entering your site, just after they get on in. Now that you got the basics of your paysite down, just keep an eye on it. You are probably going to have to fine tune it as the traffic rolls in.

One more thing, the preview pic top left Tour2.htm is linked to the wrong full size image. Besides that, I think it looks good and you are one sexy bitch. (and I mean bitch in the most complimentary of ways)

If you want to get more webmasters promoting your website, work on making some free hosted galleries, and offer the option of custom tours which won't contain any traffic leaks. You're heading in the right direction!

Good Luck!

[ChevyBalls]

Oh, one more thing. The tour goes in a circle. It should end at the signup page.

Good Luck!

[demiworld]

Thanks for that, have fixed everything now!!
I have created 30 galleries for free hosting but it is finding webmasters that will accept them.
They either dont take new submitters, only take galleries from partners, or charge lots of $$$ to list them.
I have submitted 30 galleries to FFM for $575 but looking at my stats I dont think I am going to get a good return on this unless it suddenly picks up.
As for search engines, do you think it is worth paying one of these companies who optimize your webpage to get a higher listing?
Thanks in advance :o)
Demi xx

[ChevyBalls]

Hi Demi!

What I meant about the hosted galleries, was to provide the galleries to any potential affiliates that join your webmaster program.

Personally I don't think it's worth paying one of those companies to optimize your webpages. Most of them are scams. You can learn how to better optimize the website yourself if you put some research into it.

Good Luck!