Birthday Babe needs design help!

[sexpress]

What is wrong with this site? I mean what should be changed in the design? Krista gets signups so it can not be totally awful.

But she asked me to help her with it, I am not a good www-designer so I thought you could give some hints.

Krista is out celebrating her birthday today! Check out this pic of her!



KristaClub.com

[qdtobbe]

thats 4 her!

[sexpress]

maybe I should add that she did the whole site herself, using my pictures. Not bad or what?

Anyway, she would really need some help and suggestions from you professionals! She is out partying now today and will be on holiday all week, but next week I will tell her to come to this board and chat with you herself.

Thanks for your time!

[neewwman]

I think you could tweak the existing design and do a lot better. My basic concept is you should start right in with some compelling content, and put the buttons at the bottom of the page. This is the way savvy webmasters are designing sites these days. For example, look at:
http://www.mikesapartment.com/main.htm
http://www.milfhunter.com/main.htm

My specific suggestions:

1. On the main tour page, lose the photo montage, which looks terrible and forces you to scroll down to see the good stuff.

2. Also lose the text on the main page. Not compelling.

3. Jump directly into the section that says "Choose YOUR Juice." This section is well-designed and compelling. Get them interested, then let them scroll down to the Join button and the other buttons (message board, links, etc.).

4. Lose the "tour" button, since it doesn't take you anywhere.

[sexpress]

Thanks!
That was some really good advice!

[a1ka1ine]

nice.