First Gallery Try

[Camsti]

Hi there folks :-)

http://www.camsti.dk/tgp/lisa_jock_default.htm

I would be really happy if everyone inhere could comment a gallery I´ve just made.

I am not so damn tough using Photoshop and Dreamweaver but I think it looks pretty nice anyway ..

So please HIT ME with all sorts of serius comments ... Will that gallery sell - and why the hell not ??

And I know - the thumbs has no links - working on a few solutions.

[tabooman]

I think it's too gloomy. But why? It's not bizare, but incest. And I think you have to make frame around pictures.

[Samantha_xox2000]

Looks pretty nice , i like it

[Camsti]

Originally posted by tabooman
I think it's too gloomy. But why? It's not bizare, but incest. And I think you have to make frame around pictures.

I must most strongley protest .. It is not - and has never ment to be - incest !

I hate pedo´s and I don´t want to have anything AT ALL to with any material where chuldren are abused !!

This gallery is a teenager blowing and older guy. I don´t think it´s either bizarre, kinky or incestius - just two people with different ages having sex ... !!!

[Samantha_xox2000]

Originally posted by tabooman
But why? It's not bizare, but incest.

Where do you see icest there ? Go to the site
Got-Fucked.com and read about it , what's the idea of the site !!! There is nothing about incest , just your imagination !

[bigwizard]

I like it but i am stuck on dial up due to network reasons so it loads slow on the gifs but is nice definatly not incest just an old man paying for a root

[Gel]

Nice layout

Though your images are way to large.

Ignoring the banners for the time being, look at the thumbs. They are all about 35K in size. Your simply using html to resize the fullsize images. You need to actually make thumbnails of the fullsize images. They should be around 5K in size. Those thumbs are then linked to the fullsize images. Try Easy Thumbnails from fookes.com

I would also cut back on the size of the banners. You currently have 105K in banners. This is causing the page to load rather slowly. I would atleast get rid of the text image and replace it with html text. It's not as flashy but will be more effective.

I like the "article" banner it stands out and is original.

The "Play Movie Sample" text on the bottom right banner will get you rejected from many TGPs. The text is misleading. It might even be considered a blink link.

Another tweak you might consider is adding alt tags to the images. Describe to thumbs, It give the dial-up user a tease to look at while the page loads and will help SE listings later on.


I also agree with Tabooman it's pretty gloomy.

[Camsti]

Thanx for the critics ...

I´ll work a little on the size of the graphics ... At the moment the gallery contains about 510.000 bytes. I´ll reduce that.

The "movie sample" is a link direct to the sponser - u can choose to see the movie, sign up or just leave again ..

But I could change the text from "play movie sample"to "click here for movie sample" or something like that ?

[pood]

yeha, thats sites kinda slow, even on my 3.5 mbit

[ListYourPorn]

Originally posted by Camsti
Hi there folks :-)

http://www.camsti.dk/tgp/lisa_jock_default.htm

I would be really happy if everyone inhere could comment a gallery I´ve just made.

I am not so damn tough using Photoshop and Dreamweaver but I think it looks pretty nice anyway ..

So please HIT ME with all sorts of serius comments ... Will that gallery sell - and why the hell not ??

And I know - the thumbs has no links - working on a few solutions.

I would list it -

[email protected]

[sisers]

Looks very nice!!!
respect

[papa cracker]

nice lookin to me