Please, help with English!

[Luft]

I'm not a native speaker, that's why I doubt correct spelling and grammar of the text I have written for my new site. If anybody has fe minutes to revise it, please suggest me my mistakes!

The document goes here:
the document

Thank you beforehand!

[Luft]

That's a pity that no English speakers can help me

[azrael]

2. Choose any site from our portfolio to promote and get you promotional materials.


should read


2. Choose any site from our portfolio to promote and get the promotional materials you need.


(wire transfers and check are also available)

missing an s on checks


Get 15$ recurring for each signup and rebill (50% partnership)

this would probably hit better
makes it sound as though there going to get a lot

Get 15$ recurring for all signups and rebills (50% partnership)


SIPPORT: (not ready)shold be support


be registered in pornaccess network registered on i think


theres a start for you

would be easier with the file instead of on the board theres a lot of small errors

[Luft]

Originally posted by azrael
2. Choose any site from our portfolio to promote and get you promotional materials.


should read


2. Choose any site from our portfolio to promote and get the promotional materials you need.


(wire transfers and check are also available)

missing an s on checks


Get 15$ recurring for each signup and rebill (50% partnership)

this would probably hit better
makes it sound as though there going to get a lot

Get 15$ recurring for all signups and rebills (50% partnership)


SIPPORT: (not ready)shold be support


be registered in pornaccess network registered on i think


theres a start for you

would be easier with the file instead of on the board theres a lot of small errors

Thank you very much!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Manowar]

Originally posted by azrael
2. Choose any site from our portfolio to promote and get you promotional materials.


should read


2. Choose any site from our portfolio to promote and get the promotional materials you need.


(wire transfers and check are also available)

missing an s on checks


Get 15$ recurring for each signup and rebill (50% partnership)

this would probably hit better
makes it sound as though there going to get a lot

Get 15$ recurring for all signups and rebills (50% partnership)


SIPPORT: (not ready)shold be support


be registered in pornaccess network registered on i think


theres a start for you

would be easier with the file instead of on the board theres a lot of small errors

Beat me too it