Critique this site

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Please give me your opinion & remember ...We're newbies. www.deepinsideme.com or www.droidgirl.com
Thanks & Hurry Up!

[Amputate Your Head]

Well, the first one is 404...
the second one... well... kinda cartoonish isn't it? And not in a Hentai kinda way....

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Hey Amputate....what is 404?

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Originally posted by Amputate Your Head:
Well, the first one is 404...
the second one... well... kinda cartoonish isn't it? And not in a Hentai kinda way....

Hey amputate...what do you mean by 404?

[dragonlady]

You're joking, right?

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[Rick55]

404 page not found

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[Amputate Your Head]

deepinsideme is 404.

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Originally posted by Rick55:
404 page not found

Please close out of here & look again. Thanks

[ez12]

your sites are a joke man ! Do you really think that you could make any money with sites like that ! hahahahhaaha go back to your work boys and let the pro's do the porn cause what you made is less than garbage !

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[Fatum]

I cant even understand what the site is about
But sure they will be many rich and mad people want to buy.

[eckjay]

I hate to critisize, but this site does not make me "grab my cock and break out my wallet."

IT SHOULD!

I'm a newbie too.

You gotta read up. "What is a 404?"

OH MY GOD!

--ECKjay

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Originally posted by ez12:
your sites are a joke man ! Do you really think that you could make any money with sites like that ! hahahahhaaha go back to your work boys and let the pro's do the porn cause what you made is less than garbage !

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Originally posted by ez12:
your sites are a joke man ! Do you really think that you could make any money with sites like that ! hahahahhaaha go back to your work boys and let the pro's do the porn cause what you made is less than garbage !

Never said we were pros dickhead & we dont want the pro market anyway! But thanks for lookin......

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Originally posted by Fatum:
I cant even understand what the site is about
But sure they will be many rich and mad people want to buy.

Thanks for lookin ..FAT. The site is about 2 amateurs, their friends, & their place in the world of cyberspace. Real people...not pros!

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Originally posted by eckjay:
I hate to critisize, but this site does not make me "grab my cock and break out my wallet."

IT SHOULD!

I'm a newbie too.

You gotta read up. "What is a 404?"

OH MY GOD!

--ECKjay

Thanks for lookin eck...were just amateurs doin our amateur thing....the site does have members & I consider the mpegs to be as good as any I've seen.