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  • Charter
    Registered User
    • Jul 2003
    • 60

    #1

    Ok - Rip It Up!!

    I'm a brand new adult webmaster. Never done this sorta thing before but hey, we all gotta learn somehow right.

    I've got 5 sites nearly ready to launch and the first site is a Charter Mark for Adult SItes. Just designed to drive traffic really and nothing else (yet).

    I would appreciate some "real" feedback on the site, idea and anything else you care to slag me off about. Better I take the critiscms now and get it right than launch it properly and get it wrong!

    Go get it here - http://charter.trueamatures.com

    Cheers!! ;)
    www.24-7content.com
  • theharvman
    Confirmed User
    • Sep 2002
    • 1366

    #2
    Way, Way, Too Much Text and scrolling. Colors are ok. Signing up was a bit difficult to find but I managed to find out how. Overall the site just seems very plain. Nothing that would make me want to come back. You need some graphics work done definitely and develop a hook that will entice people to want to join and come back for more. Good luck to ya!
    Email:[email protected]
    Site: http://TheScreamingO.com
    Program: http://http://www.idevaffiliate.com
    Skype: theharvman
    ICQ: 150092593

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    • Charter
      Registered User
      • Jul 2003
      • 60

      #3
      Ok - Thx for the feedback ;)

      I've gone for that sort of layout purposefully because it's not really a graphic site but I guess eye candy never hurt anyone.

      Did you not find the idea of pictures of members girlfriends enough to make you want to go back and just check to see how ugly the next girl was? I gotta think of something else if not!!

      Anyone else got some opinions??
      www.24-7content.com

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      • theharvman
        Confirmed User
        • Sep 2002
        • 1366

        #4
        I did click on the Ugly Girlfriend section and it lived up to its name. But no it was not enough to make me want to come back just to see how hideous the next pig was going to be so perhaps making it a contest. Give away Cash for a picture of a guy with the ugliest girlfriend. Now that is a contest! Anyone can find a pic of an UGLY chick but having the guy in the picture with them! Boy will that be an E ticket Ride!
        Email:[email protected]
        Site: http://TheScreamingO.com
        Program: http://http://www.idevaffiliate.com
        Skype: theharvman
        ICQ: 150092593

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        • Charter
          Registered User
          • Jul 2003
          • 60

          #5
          Now there's an idea! GJ! I like that so much I reckon I'll run it. 'Course, don't expect me to appear in it ;)

          Thx for the feedback
          www.24-7content.com

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          • zzgundamnzz
            Confirmed User
            • Apr 2002
            • 6102

            #6
            A few suggestions.

            1. Shrink that big green box on top of your page. I have to scroll a full page just to get down and read the news.

            2. Try to use brighter colors.
            3. Make custom headers(you need more contrast)
            4. Increase the size of your navigation links or make custom buttons.

            5. Change your top banner. Put your symbol up there.

            Other than a few minor things your site has a good concept


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