Please give me some feedback

[puresexnow]

Yello,

I just whipped this up and have bought 5000 unique general US/Canada adult traffic to send to it:

http://www.puresexnow.com/spooge/indexse.htm

How do you guys think it'll go? Or, what can I do to improve conversions?

Any help is much appreciated.

[thekebie]

It looks to obvious like a big ad to me. I wouldn't want to click anywhere.