Gallery Feedback Needed

[lil2rich4u2]

Ok im trying to add "sales text" and couldnt really think of which route to follow, so i coppied text from the sponsor tour.


I really dont like doing this, because then he see's the same text if/when he takes the tour.

What can i do to spice it up?


http://www.pleasuredvds.com/gallerie...air/index.html


Any other feedback is more than welcome


P.S dont bother telling me to drop the price in the join msg, i did that for a reason. Thanks.

[stocktrader23]

1. Larger text, that shit hurt my eyes.
2. How hard should it be to write original text for a redheads site?

[Vox]

Get larger text, I had problems reading it.
Your images are too large, 150k images are a waste of BW.

[Theo]

Never mention the trial price in such pages, unless the whole page is one huge promo which gives a complete view about the paysite the surfers are about to join (something that does not happen here)

Increase the size of the fonts and of the promo link. Regarding the text,something more creative might work.

[bawdy]

if u r going to have that text box why not tell a story about how she just shaved her pussy and would u like to have a look etc....

[Interlude]

Originally posted by bawdy
if u r going to have that text box why not tell a story about how she just shaved her pussy and would u like to have a look etc....

It amazes me that that would work with TGP surfers... most are more savvy than your average porn viewer. All I can picture is some fat nasty old bastard webmaster sitting behind his computer typing that paragraph, thinking "ahh hells yeah, I'm gonna make the $$$MAD BILLZ$$$ with this shit!"

[bawdy]

Originally posted by Interlude
It amazes me that that would work with TGP surfers... most are more savvy than your average porn viewer. All I can picture is some fat nasty old bastard webmaster sitting behind his computer typing that paragraph, thinking "ahh hells yeah, I'm gonna make the $$$MAD BILLZ$$$ with this shit!"

works for the phone sex companies

[bawdy]

oh and sleazydream