Feedback needed on my first article

[Daymare]

Good evening everyone, I just recently completed my first article and I'd really appreciate some feedback on it. What's good about it, things to improve on, etc. This is an honest request and is not intended to be a spam of any kind.

If you're interested, please read the December 8th article Here

Any and all criticisms good or bad would be appreciated. It can only make do better next time.

Thanks

[baddog]

Can I be honest? Hope so. From the gate I got the impression that this was written by someone that did not own a TGP, and only maybe submitted to them.

When I got to the end I saw that you asked questions of Sleazy, however, I am willing to bet, that if I sat down and discussed the issue you presented, I would have walked away with a different article. And again, I am making a lot of presumptions here, because I don't really know your experience in the biz, it just appeared to me that it wasn't, say, extensive.

I have talked with and read articles, posts et cetera from other "players" in the TGP game, and I failed to notice in your article, the number one source of income for them, although to your credit, I agree, that thehun, Shemp, and Sleazy are probably making more than the average TGP gallery submitter, but then again, they are probably making more than the average TGP owner too.

In retrospect, I would guess that there are more successful webmasters submitting to TGP's than there are successful owners of TGPs. I bet we could come up with all the big TGP owners in a matter of minutes, whereas it would take a few days to name everyone that does well submitting galleries.

But again, you have to know what you are doing to really succeed.

Of course this is just my opinion, I could be wrong.

[Daymare]

True, there are more successful tgp submitters than there are tgp owners, that's for sure. But what I was trying to get say is that hit for hit you are better off owning a tgp with a lot of traffic, then you are having tgp galleries that get a lot of traffic.

I respect what you are trying to say though, and I understand. Thanks for the feedback, and I'll be sure to make my point more clear in future articles!