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  • harvey
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    • Jul 2001
    • 9266

    #1

    How is it?

    About to put this online, just a little feedback before doing it
    http://www.fdsign.com/splash-final.html
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  • fnet
    Confirmed User
    • Jul 2002
    • 1721

    #2
    Eye catching page. Fire good.


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    logo part doesn't look right to me.
    the sound of one hand googlewhacking

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    • harvey
      Confirmed User
      • Jul 2001
      • 9266

      #3
      thanx for the feedback! Anyone else please?
      Last edited by harvey; 09-12-2002, 05:46 PM.
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      • reddawg
        Confirmed User
        • Apr 2002
        • 1837

        #4
        To me it appears rushed, spend more time on your design.

        Logo flows rough to smooth and back again. Not even, hard to look at, I don't like white pixels in upper coner, to distractive and out of place, give it a solid smoother look and you will be there, just my two cents, I ain't no designer
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        • koko
          Confirmed User
          • Aug 2002
          • 112

          #5
          Love it! The second page is better than splash, that 3D scape and flash is something serious. However, I think it's too over the edge for adult biz. And for prices, you'd ask more, you look like a pro and then you charge that little? Sounds fishy, maybe you'd take off the price list. But I won't hire you, so don't pay me attention

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          • harvey
            Confirmed User
            • Jul 2001
            • 9266

            #6
            Originally posted by koko
            And for prices, you'd ask more, you look like a pro and then you charge that little? Sounds fishy, maybe you'd take off the price list. But I won't hire you, so don't pay me attention


            Fishy? Why, if it's true? I'm looking to make a bigger portfolio, that's why I'm giving it so unexpensive, but only on September, this won't last forever. So if you need to hire a designer at a very unexpensive rate, here's your chance, you can also have your own pay site! ;) After all, Lawrence Connor has his own domain!
            Last edited by harvey; 09-12-2002, 07:55 PM.
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            • harvey
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              • Jul 2001
              • 9266

              #7
              and Lawrence is the name for "that touch" of style!
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