My 1st gallery :) any comments?

[RaiDeN]

Made this one for the hun, but there will be others with other recips on top (all hand made) to submit to the other tgp's

any comments?
Thought i trow it for the beasts before i submit it everywhere ;)


thanks

[RaiDeN]

lol link would be handy.

www.plaza-x.com/hairy/week1/hun.html

[Edguy!]

cool beans

[Morgan]

Looks nice, especially if thats really your 1st gallery.

couple things... all that text in the middle is kinda much. take out a few lines and make it a little bigger. also, that bottom outgoing link needs a little spice. maybe some animation or something that looks a little more like its meant to be clicked.

[Theo]

excellent for 1st gallery
4 more pics would help you get listed easier

[RaiDeN]

thanks Ganja

yeah its my 1st. but im not new to the bizz hehe, seen many galleries


as for the text, ill give that a change after some more feedback,

but im not sure of the bottom link.. i do want the gallery to be as clean as possible..

[Theo]

also it's not good idea to link to sponsor from the left images. TGP scripts will count that you have many sponsor links and reviewers wont like it.

[RaiDeN]

didnt think of that one Soul_Rebel ;) thanks for the tip (im a complete n00b to submitting) :P

just have some extra bandwith to fill hehe

[Lycanthrope]

Overall design looks good.

Like has been said, make text shorter but use a bigger font size.

I think I would put the counter at the very bottom, that would even make the bottom link stand out more.

If those are "real" images, you have at least one duplicate.

With only 12 pics, I don't think you'll get a free listing at the hun, but who knows.

[SetTheWorldonFire]

not bad for the first gallery

[RaiDeN]

hehe off to changing a few things then :P

ill post a link when i changed it

[SBJ]

yup like others said it is good for your first gallery and I'd move the counter to the bottum, cut down on the middle text .

and a thing I learned is to crop thumbs around the best part of each large image and you will get people interested more

Looks good though

[bluff]

do 4 more pics, you'll get listed easier

[RaiDeN]

Ok uploaded the 2nd version
same link

http://www.plaza-x.com/hairy/week1/hun.html

- Deleted the links from the left pics
- merged the top-pic into 1 big pic, so that it would count as 1 sponsor link
- same for bottom pic
- added 3 more pics
- deleted 2 lines middle text and made them 1 font bigger

[pimplink]

Looks really good!

[monaro]

Originally posted by RaiDeN
lol link would be handy.

www.plaza-x.com/hairy/week1/hun.html

Nice content to promote.

[Abyss_Vee]

[DarkJedi]

looks good.

[Kicker]

Really nice

[RaiDeN]

Thanks guys


ill check the post for the next hour, and if there arent any real changes i *should* make, ill start duplicating it for other TGP's ;)

[More Booze]

the gallery looks good but the second thumb links to wrong pic.

[stembolt]

nice one

av u got a guaranteed listing on the hun?

[EviLGuY]

Looks good.. gallery should do alright.

[B-Eazy]

Looks good man.. Nice job

[RaiDeN]

Thanks


now to hope it gets listed somewhere ;)

will prolly take me a couple of weeks to get me some trust from the tgp owners

[Corleone]

nice gallery but i'd delete the counter

[Reak]

Originally posted by Corleone
nice gallery but i'd delete the counter

What he said?

[Raf1]

very nice for a first gallery. Good job

[Samantha_xox2000]

Good job , not bad for the first gallery
1.I think you should not to cut the pics with text
2.Remove Counter

[Need2Know]

Nice one... Please tell sth about the effects after posting...

[Nifield]

Originally posted by RaiDeN
lol link would be handy.

www.plaza-x.com/hairy/week1/hun.html

looks good man

[ETillDawn]

looks very good!
just remove counter I guess

[Anna_O]

If you need a place to submit hairy galleries go to http://www.annasdungeon.com/webmasters.html

[Doc911]

Very Nice gallery. I agree though, don't put a counter on it.

[4Pics]

looks great!