How does this design look for my new TGP? - GoFuckYourself.com

sickbeatz · 03-08-2005, 01:50 PM

http://www.stickysquirt.com/main.html

I bougth the domain the other day, been working on it for the last hour trying to get somethign that looks some what okay

Babaganoosh · 03-08-2005, 01:51 PM

Jesus...just stop.

mistress69 · 03-08-2005, 01:52 PM

my eyes don't like it

el_greco · 03-08-2005, 01:52 PM

Not a bad start...but that white on grey is horribly hard to see...

boner 2.0 · 03-08-2005, 01:52 PM

Add contrast, its too hard to read

fitzmulti · 03-08-2005, 01:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sickbeatz

http://www.stickysquirt.com/main.html

I bougth the domain the other day, been working on it for the last hour trying to get somethign that looks some what okay

I agree, too hard to read - and your logo at the top is about 300% too high...

GiantGnome · 03-08-2005, 01:59 PM

youre kidding right?

BastarD · 03-08-2005, 02:04 PM

Can you please design 5 tgps for me please? I will pay you 2k bucks for each!

pornguy · 03-08-2005, 02:04 PM

It is a little dim. I would make some of the colors darker.

eMonk · 03-08-2005, 02:17 PM

it's very hard to read bro... =-)

0000000000000000000001000 · 03-08-2005, 02:21 PM

Contrast

James White · 03-08-2005, 02:28 PM

Wow, talk about a design that sells itself.

Lycanthrope · 03-08-2005, 02:29 PM

You may want to consider a career in quick culinary arts

Dynamix · 03-08-2005, 03:09 PM

www.tgpfactory.com - i'm running a $35 special right now.

everyone that has said contrast is certainly right. the light gray on a tad darker gray makes it hard to identity where the content boxes are.

white on gray for headers and text are barely visible.

link color (brownish orange) doesn't match the marroon header. always consider a unified color scheme, you did so with the grays although they need more contrast.

best of luck to you

03-08-2005, 01:50 PM	#1
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eMonk Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Canada Posts: 2,310	it's very hard to read bro... =-)

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Dynamix G F Y not Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: MN Posts: 2,910	www.tgpfactory.com - i'm running a $35 special right now. everyone that has said contrast is certainly right. the light gray on a tad darker gray makes it hard to identity where the content boxes are. white on gray for headers and text are barely visible. link color (brownish orange) doesn't match the marroon header. always consider a unified color scheme, you did so with the grays although they need more contrast. best of luck to you __________________ TGPFactory Full TGP Design & Installation Services ICQ 250 142 484 · AIM TGPDynamix · Email: patrick (at) tgpfactory (dot) com See who I am at AdultWhosWho.com!