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08-01-2007, 10:44 AM
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Criticisms wanted
Just want some opinions on http://www.thesmutguide.com
What can I do to improve it, is it too crowded? Too many ads? Should I move some things around? Things like that... Much appreciated  |
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08-01-2007, 06:12 PM
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Hi Dragon,
IMHO, you have too much text and too much whitespace. I'd get rid of the top left text box and chop the "what's new" section waaaaaay down (actually, I'd probably kill that too). Take a step back, pretend it's not your site, and look at it from the surfer's point of view. Best of luck 
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08-01-2007, 06:36 PM
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Site Criticism
I would change the the yellow parts to a different color maybe light blue which is easier on the eyes. Go to webdesign.org and read the tutorial on color theory. I would put some gradients on the page too. Make it the same color as Yahoo.com mybe. It is the #1 site in the world and if you notice it resembes a blue sky a little.
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08-01-2007, 06:46 PM
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I would take the banner out the black area and put it right under the whats new and cut the what's new size in half. Then I would fill the black area on top with a graphic and logo for your site.
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08-01-2007, 08:29 PM
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I'd first add in content from our partner program!
I agree with MCRIV, im on a 24" widescreen LCD and that yellowish/orange really burnt me and turned me off. Chill on the text up top, get rid of the job wanted stuff as your selling porn not yourself (hehe). There is no branding for you, when I click close, I wont remember your name - make a logo up or something to brand your name, as just a banner isnt much. Use prettier banners, the "FREE PORN" in blue and black is ancient. Feel free to contact me on icq for more help - 30146 166
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08-01-2007, 08:59 PM
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Needs a more inviting header...
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08-01-2007, 11:36 PM
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08-02-2007, 01:57 AM
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Yeah, kuntketchup.com was my first site. Trying something new with this search engine.
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