Give me a harsh critique my site..but..... - GoFuckYourself.com

Sethseekstruth · 03-26-2005, 09:13 AM

Hey;

I'd like you to give me a harsh ctiquie, but don't just say it sucks--please make a suggestion as to HOW I can fix it...please give specific examples and solutions to the problems.

I am starting off with just free stuff, and will be using money this generates to increase the value,but I am only maing 200 or so bucks a month right now.

what should i buy? what do i need to fix?

http://yahooregroup.avstour.com

http://www.wivesgonenuts.com

jonpotz · 03-26-2005, 04:35 PM

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Originally Posted by Sethseekstruth

Hey;

I'd like you to give me a harsh ctiquie, but don't just say it sucks--please make a suggestion as to HOW I can fix it...please give specific examples and solutions to the problems.

I am starting off with just free stuff, and will be using money this generates to increase the value,but I am only maing 200 or so bucks a month right now.

what should i buy? what do i need to fix?

http://yahooregroup.avstour.com

http://www.wivesgonenuts.com

Okay, here is as harsh as it gets...

The site is downright ugly...

Your links with the backround colors behind the links...get rid of em...Alot of your links I can't even read because you have a backround link color that blend with the font color.

The main entrance page...what are you thinking putting like 4 geotargeted ads of the same ad. strip that down to 1.

Whats up with your enter link, i think i just had a seizure.

Try to keep things consistant, the way you have your links in your tables makes me wanna throw up.

Hope this helps.

Sethseekstruth · 03-26-2005, 06:13 PM

What about the enter link:"?

jonpotz · 03-26-2005, 07:49 PM

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Originally Posted by Sethseekstruth

What about the enter link:"?

It has a black strip behind it...and an underline...its so hard to see what it even says...?

Barefootsies · 03-26-2005, 08:45 PM

Illiminate all of the fonts/graphics/text whatever at the top. All of it.

The bolded stuff is just a mess. Hard to read. Either put that stuff in a table box that is one solid color, and text another, or find another way to do it.

Pick one font color.

Get a snazzier font. If you are going to use something other than one of the window's defaults, make it a graphic.

Illiminate the multiple lines. Surfers are lazy, and a paragraph, or 5 lines or whatever it was is not going to get most to read. Think of what you want to say and either get it into bullet points, one sentence, or several short one's.

Illiminate United States. I am not sure 100%, but I think AFF is mainly U.S., hence most people would know it's U.S., and you can illiminate an extra space or line.

Pictures in your black box are not lining up correctly. I am viewing it in Firefox, and images on end are cut off, along with text.

You have duplicate images, but different names in second box. So you have different people, but with same pictures.

Use the space at the bottom more effectively. You have nothing there. While you may, or may not get a sale from it, put something down there. Maybe a sponsor, maybe a second box saying something you currently have at the top. Or creditentials about your site or something. Just doesn't look professional, or reputable at the moment.

Rockhound · 03-27-2005, 08:19 AM

did someone spill a box of skittles?

Sethseekstruth · 03-27-2005, 11:41 PM

great suggestions--i will follow all of them, check back tommorow and tell me what you think

JimmiDean · 03-28-2005, 05:01 AM

You have no warning page and have hardcore on the first page
you have no 2257
and you use Yahoos name on your page
Dont worry about money you may be in prison soon
change that stuff asap before you get in real trouble

JimmiDean · 03-28-2005, 04:11 PM

I was probably hard on you in my post but you need to cover your but my friend All your hardwork will be down the drain once Yahoo or someone rats you out to your provider and they pull the plug.

Sethseekstruth · 03-30-2005, 07:33 PM

Hey;

you are not hards at all, but I can't log in to my site so i can change it now..btw, many sites mention yahoo group finding, yahoo deleted 1000s of groups, and 1000s more are now not listed.

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Originally Posted by JimmiDean

I was probably hard on you in my post but you need to cover your but my friend All your hardwork will be down the drain once Yahoo or someone rats you out to your provider and they pull the plug.

03-26-2005, 09:13 AM	#1
Sethseekstruth Confirmed User Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Richmond, va Posts: 588	Give me a harsh critique my site..but..... Hey; I'd like you to give me a harsh ctiquie, but don't just say it sucks--please make a suggestion as to HOW I can fix it...please give specific examples and solutions to the problems. I am starting off with just free stuff, and will be using money this generates to increase the value,but I am only maing 200 or so bucks a month right now. what should i buy? what do i need to fix? http://yahooregroup.avstour.com http://www.wivesgonenuts.com __________________ https://www.niteflirt.com/pid/12631704 Last edited by Sethseekstruth; 03-26-2005 at 09:15 AM.. Reason: oops forgot something

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03-26-2005, 08:45 PM	#5
Barefootsies Choice is an Illusion Industry Role: Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Land of Obama Posts: 42,635	Illiminate all of the fonts/graphics/text whatever at the top. All of it. The bolded stuff is just a mess. Hard to read. Either put that stuff in a table box that is one solid color, and text another, or find another way to do it. Pick one font color. Get a snazzier font. If you are going to use something other than one of the window's defaults, make it a graphic. Illiminate the multiple lines. Surfers are lazy, and a paragraph, or 5 lines or whatever it was is not going to get most to read. Think of what you want to say and either get it into bullet points, one sentence, or several short one's. Illiminate United States. I am not sure 100%, but I think AFF is mainly U.S., hence most people would know it's U.S., and you can illiminate an extra space or line. Pictures in your black box are not lining up correctly. I am viewing it in Firefox, and images on end are cut off, along with text. You have duplicate images, but different names in second box. So you have different people, but with same pictures. Use the space at the bottom more effectively. You have nothing there. While you may, or may not get a sale from it, put something down there. Maybe a sponsor, maybe a second box saying something you currently have at the top. Or creditentials about your site or something. Just doesn't look professional, or reputable at the moment. __________________ Should You Email Your Members? Link1 \| Link2 \| Link3 Enough Said. "Would you rather live like a king for a year or like a prince forever?"

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03-28-2005, 05:01 AM	#8
JimmiDean Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Margarittaville Posts: 3,433	You have no warning page and have hardcore on the first page you have no 2257 and you use Yahoos name on your page Dont worry about money you may be in prison soon change that stuff asap before you get in real trouble __________________ My God there's Porn on here! Still on the Beach !!!

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03-28-2005, 04:11 PM	#9
JimmiDean Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Margarittaville Posts: 3,433	I was probably hard on you in my post but you need to cover your but my friend All your hardwork will be down the drain once Yahoo or someone rats you out to your provider and they pull the plug. __________________ My God there's Porn on here! Still on the Beach !!!