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Savanas · 05-03-2003, 06:47 PM

http://www.mandingobrothers.com/

Ive advertised via text links and banner placement on al4a.com and pornno.com (otherwise known as jjj's), along with an ad on google. My webstats page says that I have had over 300,000 visitors so far, and I've only gotten 9 members. I know that theres other advertisement venues to be done but only 9 members from 300,000 visitors seem ridiculous. My only other conclusion is that something is missing on the site. It would be greatly appreciated if anyone can go to my site, take the tour, view the samples and offer constructive criticism on how to make it better, what to add, and what to take off. Thanx in advance.

megaporn · 05-03-2003, 07:23 PM

you are sick

Savanas · 05-03-2003, 07:34 PM

LOL, not the kind of constructive criticism I was looking for, but thanx.

Marcus Aurelius · 05-04-2003, 01:51 AM

FUCKED ET TOO....good f***ing lord that crap was funny..im still laughing.

RFC · 05-04-2003, 07:44 AM

conent is interesting, but design isn't convinsing!
Not becasue I'm designer. but look at it.
You are showing much of content, which is good, but logo isn't quite fitting. And that background blowjob, maybe should be changed on every page.
Join button is not in the centre of the whole theme, and it should be, as it's your goal, to make a sign up!

directfiesta · 05-04-2003, 09:40 AM

Nice niche...
When are you going to have Miss Rice ????

OK: design is not bad, but I have been told that black is not a plus for a paysite...????
Free stuff is good and sufficient to give the surfer the " big picture"...
Maybe a ckearer description of quantity of content and how frequent are updates....

KIU!

Savanas · 05-04-2003, 10:04 AM

Direct Fiesta....., when you say that black is not a plus for a paysite, are you referring to the background color of the site or the content (black people)

RFC....., Any suggestions on how your would change the logo to fit the site?

RFC · 05-04-2003, 10:32 AM

Anything diferent than simple font! Maybe some effects, or somethinglike thatt.
Hit me on ICQ, maybe I have something for you!

Savanas · 05-04-2003, 11:33 AM

i dont have icq capabilities, you can send me an email on [email protected] or instant message me if you can. or any other medium that you can come up with.

RFC · 05-04-2003, 01:37 PM

Try downloading ICQ from www.icq.com
I'll send you mail tomorrow.

CGI · 05-05-2003, 01:44 AM

lol... pretty wild idea for a site... great idea on the content and theme!

Design needs some work though... plenty of samples, but the tour just doesn't seem busy enough. I also have to agree that the black background on a paysite doesn't always work (depends on the niche and theme, of course), but you need to talk to a designer about that

No real constructive comments (I'm tired), but I just had to post to compliment the content

I'm dying over here... the content and theme (the text to go with it, etc) rocks

directfiesta · 05-05-2003, 08:20 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Savanas
Direct Fiesta....., when you say that black is not a plus for a paysite, are you referring to the background color of the site or the content (black people)

RFC....., Any suggestions on how your would change the logo to fit the site?

background color... never thought it could be viewed otherwise, but ....

RFC · 05-05-2003, 09:21 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Savanas
i dont have icq capabilities, you can send me an email on [email protected] or instant message me if you can. or any other medium that you can come up with.

Check your mail!

markell · 05-10-2003, 07:45 PM

lol @ the socks... a habbit i have, but anyway site needs soem work, if you are thnking about getting it redesigned.. email me [email protected]

05-03-2003, 06:47 PM	#1
Savanas Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Location: New Rochelle, NY Posts: 7	my site needs constructive criticism http://www.mandingobrothers.com/ Ive advertised via text links and banner placement on al4a.com and pornno.com (otherwise known as jjj's), along with an ad on google. My webstats page says that I have had over 300,000 visitors so far, and I've only gotten 9 members. I know that theres other advertisement venues to be done but only 9 members from 300,000 visitors seem ridiculous. My only other conclusion is that something is missing on the site. It would be greatly appreciated if anyone can go to my site, take the tour, view the samples and offer constructive criticism on how to make it better, what to add, and what to take off. Thanx in advance.

05-04-2003, 07:44 AM	#5
RFC Registered User Join Date: Jan 2002 Posts: 71	conent is interesting, but design isn't convinsing! Not becasue I'm designer. but look at it. You are showing much of content, which is good, but logo isn't quite fitting. And that background blowjob, maybe should be changed on every page. Join button is not in the centre of the whole theme, and it should be, as it's your goal, to make a sign up! __________________ Bloody Hell! What a discount!!! Three tours + splash - $200 \| AVS (splash + tour) - $100 10 banners - $75 \| logo - $35 \| TGP design - $80 ICQ 55284152

05-04-2003, 09:40 AM	#6
directfiesta Too lazy to set a custom title Industry Role: Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Montréal - Punta Cana, DR Posts: 30,130	Nice niche... When are you going to have Miss Rice ???? OK: design is not bad, but I have been told that black is not a plus for a paysite...???? Free stuff is good and sufficient to give the surfer the " big picture"... Maybe a ckearer description of quantity of content and how frequent are updates.... KIU! __________________ I know that Asspimple is stoopid ... As he says, it is a FACT ! But I can't figure out how he can breathe or type , at the same time ....

05-04-2003, 10:32 AM	#8
RFC Registered User Join Date: Jan 2002 Posts: 71	Anything diferent than simple font! Maybe some effects, or somethinglike thatt. Hit me on ICQ, maybe I have something for you! __________________ Bloody Hell! What a discount!!! Three tours + splash - $200 \| AVS (splash + tour) - $100 10 banners - $75 \| logo - $35 \| TGP design - $80 ICQ 55284152

05-04-2003, 01:37 PM	#10
RFC Registered User Join Date: Jan 2002 Posts: 71	Try downloading ICQ from www.icq.com I'll send you mail tomorrow. __________________ Bloody Hell! What a discount!!! Three tours + splash - $200 \| AVS (splash + tour) - $100 10 banners - $75 \| logo - $35 \| TGP design - $80 ICQ 55284152

05-03-2003, 07:23 PM	#2
megaporn Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: top of the world Posts: 255	you are sick

05-03-2003, 07:34 PM	#3
Savanas Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Location: New Rochelle, NY Posts: 7	LOL, not the kind of constructive criticism I was looking for, but thanx.

05-04-2003, 01:51 AM	#4
Marcus Aurelius No Refunds Issued. Industry Role: Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 14,809	FUCKED ET TOO....good f***ing lord that crap was funny..im still laughing.

05-04-2003, 10:04 AM	#7
Savanas Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Location: New Rochelle, NY Posts: 7	Direct Fiesta....., when you say that black is not a plus for a paysite, are you referring to the background color of the site or the content (black people) RFC....., Any suggestions on how your would change the logo to fit the site?

05-04-2003, 11:33 AM	#9
Savanas Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Location: New Rochelle, NY Posts: 7	i dont have icq capabilities, you can send me an email on [email protected] or instant message me if you can. or any other medium that you can come up with.

05-05-2003, 01:44 AM	#11
CGI Confirmed User Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Portland, OR Posts: 139	lol... pretty wild idea for a site... great idea on the content and theme! Design needs some work though... plenty of samples, but the tour just doesn't seem busy enough. I also have to agree that the black background on a paysite doesn't always work (depends on the niche and theme, of course), but you need to talk to a designer about that No real constructive comments (I'm tired), but I just had to post to compliment the content I'm dying over here... the content and theme (the text to go with it, etc) rocks __________________ Komply - The 2257 record keeping & content management application (sneak preview) Manic Cash - Tight Niches, Solid Payouts... ICQ 346121285

05-10-2003, 07:45 PM	#14
markell Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: Las Vegas & Los Angeles Posts: 1,190	lol @ the socks... a habbit i have, but anyway site needs soem work, if you are thnking about getting it redesigned.. email me [email protected] __________________ blah blah fucking blah