Critic This New Site Please

[CumSensei]

Still sucks....

[Tipsy]

Ugh

[rogerbo]

You still do the same shit as allways. Why do you copy your shity site and sell it including your refcodes to a poor newbie ??
You'r realy one of the bigest idiots i met in my live.
Don't you have a little honor in you ??
I would be a shamed if i would sell someone something like that for $150.
Here is a free Tip. Buy a site for $100 so you still can make $50.
But then atleast the poor guy gets something which is worth $100 bucks.

NJ how comes that you now do accept any critiques ? when we tryd to help you before the only thing you could do was Drinking and then come back and spamm us and tell us that we'r all Idiots.

But you know I'm happy you'r here so at least i had some fun Today

[Heineken]

Did you say u paid 15 $. cause it's a lot!

[Juggernaut]

Isn't this the same style of design you posted a week or so ago? - any level headed designer knows that in order for you to allow anyone else to see your work, *you* of all people should be happy with it... clearly you yourself think it's crap on some level.

The one thing that bothers me most about this, is that it seems you're selling a crappy design to a person that is obviously new to the adult web industry, even more so, to design. Thus giving them the impression that this is how it is; when, it isn't.

It does not suprise me if this is what you do all the time, get someone to buy a design off of you for a price and with the design comes some kind of advice on "making money" on the internet? every site you've posted so far, has been technically under developed and look as if they're a scam of some kind.

Maybe you should look at selling insurance, that seems to be a boom industry every time war happens.

[Roald]

Originally posted by SwingersDiary



Not bad at all for $350.. who's the designer?

That would be me

[thequeen]

Originally posted by NastyJack


I also checked out the site that MetaformX is selling for $200.00
http://www.everclearproductions.com/clients/open2/ and I didn't see anything special about it.

No offense dude but that site looks 100 times better then that 1996 looking shit you made.

[evildick]

I would get rid of the frames altogether. They are a pain for surfers who like to surf by right clicking and opening in a new window, and from what I understand, they can also hurt you in the search engines.

[fear]

Wonder if this will work:

delete http://www.adultxplus.com/blackvelvet/index.html*.*

[CumSensei]

Originally posted by fear
Wonder if this will work:

delete http://www.adultxplus.com/blackvelvet/index.html*.*

Naa its still there.

[Rip]

Here....

[Burtman]

You said you sold this site design for $150 but then you are posting on the traffic trading board:
http://bbs.gofuckyourself.com/showth...hreadid=108596
Hi Guys,

I just started this new site and I need some small trades so if you have a new site and would like to exchange links with
http://www.adultxplus.com/blackvelvet/index.html please take a sec and click on the "contact me" link so we can start some trades.

Regards
NastyJack


I think you should gather all of your multiple personalities together and get their shit together.


Burtman

[NastyJack]

Originally posted by Burtman
I think you should gather all of your multiple personalities together and get their shit together.

Burtman

I didn't charge $150.00 just to slap the site on the net dude.
I'm also going to drive traffic to it and keep updating it for as long as he wants me to.

The guy knows I'm no pro but just the same his pleased with it.

I also would like to add that if he doesn't make his money back that I'll give him his $150.00 back.

Anyway, I changed a few things on it as it was suggested so you may want to have another look at it.

www.adultxplus.com/blackvelvet/index.html

I'll be updating it today so if anyone has anymore suggestions I would appreciate hearing them.

Regards
NastyJack

[TDF]

my eyes...my beautiful eyes!!

[rogerbo]

Originally posted by NastyJack


I didn't charge $150.00 just to slap the site on the net dude.
I'm also going to drive traffic to it and keep updating it for as long as he wants me to.

That's about the bigest Joke you made sofar You want to drive traffic to it ?? HOW if you'r not jet able to drive traffc to your own site.

Remeber just 20 hits a month aint no traffic