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[sairanx]

Hello all,

I've been working on a splash page today and i would like to recieve some comments or critisism about it.

The site is: http://www.sairanx.com

The main problem is that my native language is not english and i was wondering if any of the sentences used on the page sounds stupid for americans (the majorety of the potential cotumers)

Thank you,
Jannes

[Jamdin]

Not bad but black text on dark gray background is hard to read (plus you don't need the "." after the final "...anal sex:")

Everything else looks great & it loads fast. Good luck with it.

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[Exxxotica]

Uhh....very sexy

I really like the "Woofy Bears" section.

Boneprone should check this site out...he may want you to be part of the Boneprone family!

Boneprone is totaly into Woofy Bears.

[This message has been edited by Exxxotica (edited 05-16-2001).]

[sairanx]

The black text is for the se's only. but thanx for the comment.

Exxxotica> there is a niche marked for everything :-)

[boneprone]

uhhhhh.

[boneprone]

Intresting niche.. Fat, hairy, baldy guys..

If someone is looking for that niche, you would be the place to get the best of that!

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[SonOfRage]

DAM!

Gay dudes like Fat, Bald, Hairy guys! That's pretty nasty!

I wonder if there is a nich for Fat, Bald, Hairy women! Now that I could dig!

[sairanx]

this site is going to be a AVS site built to promote http://www.bearlovin.com/ (chek out the hairy bald guys in their tour :-)

That site is an ARS site so i figured that there should be a marked for that kind of content.

Based on the fact that most webmasters only build websites with content they pesonally like i think that this kind of sites are a bit rare and therefor moneymakers.

But feal free to continue making teen sites, i don't mind...

[This message has been edited by sairanx (edited 05-16-2001).]

[SonOfRage]

I aint diss on ya bro.

I would do gay sites if I had the stomach for it. I hear they do very well. I just wouldnt know what to use as content. I tend to like young studs, like Dr Dre!

Best of luck to ya.


BTW are you Horny Bear from Holland? Do you also run Bizarre Rituals?

[sairanx]

no i do not own that site.

just buy a content cd and put everything on your site... not that hard isn't it?

But you are right, i do not know what kind of pictures i should use to marked the site, so i just pikced some pictures at random and used them.
(that's how the bald guy ended up on the splash page :-)

[Gemini]

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This would be a little better. You can't ask those guys to check spelling since they seem to be lousy at it.


[This message has been edited by Gemini (edited 05-16-2001).]

[ez12]

how does gay convert these days ?

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[sairanx]

Thanx Gemini!
I've updated the site.

If you have a gay site, post the url and I'll link to it (from the inside of the page since Cyber Age doesn't allow outside links on the platinum program)


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