Rate a logo
 

Well, actually sofar, just rate my cartoon char that will be a part of a logo for a free gay site.
Whaddya think? It's my first try at a male manga pic.
I know the coloring is a bit odd at parts... gimme a honest opinion. :)
http://www.jesterdesigns.com/looo.jpg

I'm off to bed, I wanna see atleast 1 reply when I come back in 6 hours or so.:glugglug

For your first i think its good :thumbsup

Looks good, dude, very good even.

Nice.

:glugglug

very nice :thumbsup what program do you use fro drawing?

Looks like a good start

A pen, a scanner and photoshop.
Thanks for the sweet replies everyone. :)

am i the only idiot not seeing the drawing?

YES :1orglaugh

Hey TGF ... that Rocks !!!

I can draw the FUKENGRUVEN stick man quite well ... but that is the extent of my personal toon talents ... that is why I have 2 very talented artists on staff ...

Now if constructive criticism is what you are after, I would say overall it is a very good attempt ... the body is proportionate, which is where so many people fuck up ... All I would fix is make the hands a little more believeable, and maybe give him a slight nose job ... :thumbsup

You have NO idea how many erasers I wasted on those hands so far, I do agree they suck ass. A nose job may be implemented too before I make it an actual logo :)

I think its very good overall.

The upper body is a bit amorphous & doughy tho, give that boy some muscle definition!

What can I say... he's a twink :1orglaugh

exactly what i would say gutterboy

and teengodfather.... twinks don't mean no muscle... trust me, i know :)

Am I the only one getting a red X?


Jak

hehehehe............. not bad TeenGodfather

BUT please look at your figure's left hand, notice anything odd? :Graucho

That's why I stick to STICK MEN brother !!!

I've been trying to get a job as the design guy at VOLKSWAGEN for years now !!!! :1orglaugh :1orglaugh

i wanted to be a cartoonist when i was in college, i submitted to every fucking men's magazine, Playboy, Penthouse, Hustler......never got anything accepted, i may have been too demented even for Larry Flynt. I got some trade magazines to buy some but they pay like 40 dollars, some even less so i gave that up.

BUT the cartoonists greatest tool is a mirror, you should have a mirror when u draw, for facial expressions, hand gestures, etc

i know man, hands always drove me nuts that's why i was looking at yours. The left hand - the thumb is on the wrong side! he's a mutant! :1orglaugh

take a figure drawing class, or just buy a good figure drawing book, there are lots of them.

the left hand of the manga twink i mean HIS left hand, to the right for the viewer.

Since when do humans have thier thumb on the left hand on the outside?!?!?!

Hands are one of the hardest things to draw. Look at todays video and pc games - great work with characters, but most of them have some fugly hands.

Looks good. Just fix his left hand.

Ahahaha.. :)
Holy shit. That's funny.
How didn't I notice something like that myself?! Well...

No no no !!! It is very obvious what happened here ...

The poor guy used his left hand to apply some penis growth cream, and now his fingers are all big and fat ... that is actually his pinky finger !! :1orglaugh

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Its coo I likes it

pretty good!

what's he supposed to be holding?

A tube of PENIS GROWTH CREAM :1orglaugh

Looks good man,..:thumbsup