GoFuckYourself.com - Adult Webmaster Forum - Super clean gallery critique

Well in my quest for building a super clean gallery, I have failed. I'm not bad at the agreessive ones, but clean ones, my downfall is I always fear I'm adding too much.

http://www.picjunkie.com/galleries/light/cheer/3/

This whole trend of super clean makes it difficult to make a sale now. I sincerely would love to work at my skills and imporve them. That's why I'm posting.

I really want to get away from using banners, and I would assume that for most the BOTTOM link in any gallery gets clicked on more than the top one. That is my experience anyways.

So I searched around for some good copy people were using, but I am WEAK in copywriting and salesmanship when it comes to plain old text.

If anyone has any examples of good converting galleries or suggestions critiques, face spitting etc, it's all welcome.