Ok, What do you think of this song..? AGAIN!

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  • Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE
    North Coast Pimp
    • Dec 2005
    • 9395

    #1

    Ok, What do you think of this song..? AGAIN!

    First time there was a audio issue... It is fixed and is much clearer now.. Also note, this song is not the final..



    Thanks for your input..
  • candyflip
    Carpe Visio
    • Jul 2002
    • 43074

    #2
    I'm willing to bet you get the same feedback.

    Spend you some brain.
    Email Me

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    • WarChild
      Let slip the dogs of war.
      • Jan 2003
      • 17263

      #3
      You're a failure of epic levels.
      .

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      • candyflip
        Carpe Visio
        • Jul 2002
        • 43074

        #4
        I see I have already been proven correct.

        Spend you some brain.
        Email Me

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        • Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE
          North Coast Pimp
          • Dec 2005
          • 9395

          #5
          Thanks for the feedback...

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          • 420
            cuck
            • Mar 2003
            • 11571

            #6
            Is that Mindwaste aka T-Rain mumbling on there?
            <!--BEGIN SIMUTRONICS PLAY BUTTON CODE -->
            <p align="center">

            <a href="http://buddy.play.net/dr?TMOREAU1">

            <img src="drplay.gif" width="128" height="64" alt="Play DragonRealms!"></a></p>

            <!--END SIMUTRONICS PLAY BUTTON CODE -->

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            • spacedog
              Yes that IS me. Bitch.
              • Nov 2001
              • 14149

              #7
              take out the vocals and it'll sound much better..

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              • Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE
                North Coast Pimp
                • Dec 2005
                • 9395

                #8
                Great feedback.. Bump for more..

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                • Poindexterity
                  Confirmed User
                  • Feb 2008
                  • 882

                  #9
                  YOU DID ME WRONG!!!

                  i liked it except for the early 80's amateur miami
                  producer stock keyboard sounds beat.
                  that and the same ol same ol
                  commercial fronting and rhymin common rhymes
                  like this how far we go and i gotta let you know
                  and yadda yadda yadda

                  and the fact that the cell phone ring is the loudest thing in the whole song.

                  yeah, total butt pee to be brief.
                  no sig

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                  • Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE
                    North Coast Pimp
                    • Dec 2005
                    • 9395

                    #10
                    Originally posted by Poindexterity
                    YOU DID ME WRONG!!!

                    i liked it except for the early 80's amateur miami
                    producer stock keyboard sounds beat.
                    that and the same ol same ol
                    commercial fronting and rhymin common rhymes
                    like this how far we go and i gotta let you know
                    and yadda yadda yadda

                    and the fact that the cell phone ring is the loudest thing in the whole song.

                    yeah, total butt pee to be brief.
                    Great input.. Thanks

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                    • ExLust
                      Confirmed User
                      • Aug 2008
                      • 3223

                      #11
                      Hhahaha, bump for more.

                      BE A PARTNER

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                      • Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE
                        North Coast Pimp
                        • Dec 2005
                        • 9395

                        #12
                        Originally posted by ExLust
                        Hhahaha, bump for more.
                        Thanks for the bump...

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                        • Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE
                          North Coast Pimp
                          • Dec 2005
                          • 9395

                          #13
                          bump.. bump...

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                          • nico-t
                            emperor of my world
                            • Aug 2004
                            • 29901

                            #14
                            t-rain is way better you shoud sign him

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                            • nico-t
                              emperor of my world
                              • Aug 2004
                              • 29901

                              #15
                              i used to be better than all of you btw: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/defa...m?bandID=37427

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                              • Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE
                                North Coast Pimp
                                • Dec 2005
                                • 9395

                                #16
                                Originally posted by nico-t
                                t-rain is way better you shoud sign him


                                Originally posted by nico-t
                                i used to be better than all of you btw: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/defa...m?bandID=37427
                                Not bad..

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                                • munki
                                  Do Fun Shit.
                                  • Dec 2004
                                  • 13393

                                  #17
                                  I think I like this one:


                                  I have the simplest tastes. I am always satisfied with the best.” -Oscar Wilde

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                                  • Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE
                                    North Coast Pimp
                                    • Dec 2005
                                    • 9395

                                    #18
                                    Originally posted by munki
                                    I think I like this one:

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                                    • tranza
                                      ICQ: 197-556-237
                                      • Jun 2003
                                      • 57559

                                      #19
                                      Fail thread
                                      I'm just a newbie.

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                                      • $5 submissions
                                        I help you SUCCEED
                                        • Nov 2003
                                        • 32189

                                        #20
                                        The keyboards didn't do it for me.

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                                        • Si
                                          Such Fun!
                                          • Feb 2008
                                          • 13900

                                          #21
                                          that is fucking terrible!

                                          I hope your not really thinking of pushing this shit

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                                          • candyflip
                                            Carpe Visio
                                            • Jul 2002
                                            • 43074

                                            #22
                                            Originally posted by mobilefun1987
                                            that is fucking terrible!

                                            I hope your not really thinking of pushing this shit
                                            Wot u talkin' bout? That is some major label shit right there.

                                            It even says so on his MySpace.

                                            Spend you some brain.
                                            Email Me

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                                            • Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE
                                              North Coast Pimp
                                              • Dec 2005
                                              • 9395

                                              #23
                                              Thanks for all the feedback.. I can't wait to show Nonsentz..



                                              Looks like we need the beat redone... Him to work on sounding less commercial.. And work with his tonality a bit...


                                              Keep them coming guys... Nonsentz needs this criticism... Everyone locally thinks he is the hottest thing around and hardly criticizes him...


                                              It was funny cause we were talking about it the other day.. I told him I am going to post that song a place were critics will come out by the dozens..

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                                              • Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE
                                                North Coast Pimp
                                                • Dec 2005
                                                • 9395

                                                #24
                                                The feedback was perfect.. We welcome more.. I showed this thread to Nonsentz.. He loved the criticism.. Just what he needs..

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