New Site Design.... BrookLittle.com
 

Would love some feedback to what you think about our first draft for our new site BrookLittle.com :)

http://brookelittle.com/brooklittle_draft.jpg

:thumbsup

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same error here

Yeah dude, get that shit off of lock down so we can have a look

Hmmm...
 

Thats weird it opened for me but not on here :(

http://brookelittle.com/brooklittle_draft.jpg

Think if you cut and paste the url in to an explorer it will work...

Put a www. infront.

nice.:thumbsup

http://www.brookelittle.com/brooklittle_draft.jpg

Looks very nice too :)

Yay
 

This one should work...

Brook Little First Draft Take 2

lol that dont work now either (not when directly clicked on anyway!)

Best to just copy and paste the link (or see the post above)

Looks pretty good. I think you could probably make the photos "pop" a bit more

Yeah
 

My feeling is the design is a little flat... is that what you mean by "pop" a bit more... :thumbsup

i like the chick... the colors are killing me...

add some depth to the model extractions for one... change the yellowness of the site... other than that i like it ;)

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Yeah that link worked. Nice tour. :thumbsup

read the whole thread, man. For once, maybe?

Hey Deej
 

Well I want the yellow changed, but maybe to something a little stronger... as in a better yellow lol... we wanted to make the site design real girlie... and have different colours from the usual pinks, reds, blacks... so a more pastal colour scheme even if a little more vibrant was what we was shooting for...

OK I know pastal and vibrant dont really go... damn I wish it was easier to explain what we want, my poor designer :1orglaugh We're also going to change some of the pics... there are a few more that show off her boobs better lol ! Along with some text and gramma changes...

I will post version 2 once the changes are done... any more suggestions ?

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Any more replies ?

her boobies are not too little. nice!

mmmm boobies...

Yay
 

Glad your all liking the boobies :)

Pastels are good for teenish sites... vibrance is fun... you can pull them both off with some nice swoops n swirls... the design as is is on the right road... its the dull yellow (which i think you also feel) and the rainbow title bars are to me, annoying... that might be it...

plus im fond of model depth - shadows and shit... maybe just blurs...

just makes the girls pop a little instead of keeping the 2D look...


almost there :thumbsup

The pastels are also killing me a little... if they were a bit bolder and less washed out. The photography is also adjusted on the high-key side so it looks as if I'm dropping acid and everything is way too intense. Otherwise, functionally, you're pretty much on par with what's out there.