ok i think its fixed Feedback please
 

ok went through all the spelling and pretty much checked it twice.. since that was the feedback that i got about my site that the grammer stunk...

so please give it a run through and tell me what you think...

thanks

http://www.nudeoncam.com

You pick up web design for dummies & dreamweaver yet?

thanks for the useless feedback

It is grammAr, but on the whole - it looks fine to me - I only looked at the first two pages. I am not 100% sure what type of site it is - as I didn't really read much.

It looks fine, but you might want to make it look more tempting. How to do that? Well I don't know - sorry...

looks the same as before, only on a new domain.

How often do you update?

You and Va2k would be PERFECT together

You may need to work a little harder on the sell. Everything on the free side of an amateur site should be a tease that tempts them to join up to satisfy themselves and see the rest.

If anything, you're giving them way too much to click and look at for free. Surfers have a short attention span. Grab 'em, tease 'em, try to sell 'em, if not get rid of 'em. Save your bandwidth and ship them off to someone else (sponsor or traffic swap) to see if they can do anything with them.

thanks for the input