Can I get some help proofing this grammer?
 

Thanks.

www.lionita.com

I get paid for that kind of work, and it's grammAr :winkwink: but I will say you have a lot of errors. It really needs to be re-written. I'm sure someone will come along to help you.

It is not incorrect grammatically that I can see, but reads a little stilted, imho.

I personally would leave this sentence out all together:

"Her strange ability has been documented and will be published soon."

I assume the writer was trying to convey her ability to make you fall in love, etc, but strange ability can cover a lot of things, and some of them not good. ;)

How about The Witch Doctors Doughter, it'a a true story and it is real and strange.:)

Thanks for the feedback...

Oh ...and the dude that corrected my typo:321GFY

spelling errors and typos are 2 different things, and I wasn't trying to be a dick.. well, maybe I was :winkwink: :321GFY back at ya

Welcome, and see your icq. :)

I think this sounds better :2 cents:

When I met her, she was around 18 years of age. She has the heart of a saint and is just so beautifully cute. Because of her story (which we will release sometime
in the future) this site only features R Rated video clips. Yes she is nude,
a lot, but there is no sex or sleazy spread shoots. You can tell what I mean
by watching the FREE 1minute video below. You will just fall in love, and I mean literally. Her strange ability has been documented and will be published soon.

Did you mean grammar?

gezzz..Thinking deep there bro, thanks for the chance to bump.:pimp

double post..sorry

:winkwink: :thumbsup

Shit, quoted my own damn post. I meant to quote yours so I edited.