DebsDeepthroat Makeover, Tell whatcha think
 

Took everyones advice, gave the site a face lift and it seems to be doing excellent!!
http://www.debsdeepthroat.com
If you see something we should improve on lemme know k?
Thanks

Very nice stuff Deb,
only negative for me would be the tour button is way to hard to find.
Good luck with the site and nice work.

ok thanks, maybe I should animate it? Or....

some text or alt tags might help you with search engines...Also takes a REALLY long time to load because of all these images.

It's a DEEP THROAT site yet on the main page and first tour page, of all the images, there is just one tiny photo of any deep throat action. Put up more photos showing what she can do. Repeatedly mention she swallows 10" thick inches to the balls and show it.

A lot of grammar/spelling errors, too.

One more thing Deb,
The video clip text mentions ass fucking but there is none in the vid preview maybe add some or just change the text.
But remember free advice is worth every penny you pay and less.
Cheers

ok thanks all, back to work to fix these things

I figured the flash would show the actual deepthroat, along with the sample movie.

At least one deepthroat pic should be on the first main page...

that is, after all, what you are selling.

You should probably have that pic specially shot for the tour page... nice hair, makeup, wardrobe, lighting and wild expression on your face.

The flash video just doesn't help communicate that quickly enough.

http://www.whosnaughty.com/ looks like a nice traffic leak.

Yeah. :upsidedow

It may look good, but considering you've got over 9 slices, and each slice seems to be around 40 KB, that's a lot of waiting for those with slower connections just to access the splash page.

Not to mention that you've embedded the text into the image slices, so any search engines won't pick up on the text you've used on the splash page, making it all very bad from an SEO point of view.

Hehehe i see you took some of my advice ;)

Looking way better already not yet perfect but certainly going the good way :)

My next advice is to checkout your slices size their a little too big over 40kb each the whole page is like over 5MB to load thats too much ...

Try to replace the ones that dont need much detail to gifs..


Also the name suggest deepthroat.. Try to put more deepthroat action on the front ...

Going good we talk on icq :)

Yes I did take your advice. Ok so now I need to get these other pieces of advice taken care of
Thanks

looks nice to me

Looking nice :)

Going to leave the traffic leak up?