MarkTiarra |
12-18-2007 11:47 AM |
You should be a reviewer at garage band! =] Nice work.
This whole song (and hence the name) came together as a test of the EZ Drummer software ( http://www.toontrack.com/) and so really I just through together a drum track and jammed over it. To hear something that is more fitting with what I usually do on an instrumental see: http://www.marktiarra.com/music/mark...antasclaws.mp3
I generally like to do more with the composition as I am a big fan of guys like Scott Henderson, Mike Stern and Joe Satriani. On a lot of this track I am using the out of phase pickup selection, which rarely gets used by PRS guys.
The bass is actually a little heavier on this than I usually do and I master on a spectragraph too to make sure I'm getting even response across the EQ bands. You might want to pop it on something else to hear and see if it comes out. Even with the spectragraph I still find that getting a consistent mix across platforms hasn't happened consistently for me yet.
Again, thanks for the detailed comments.
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Originally Posted by Adult Lounge - Brad
(Post 13531873)
Honest opinion:
As a instrumental track it is not very good. There is not enough going on and sounds like it need vocals. When I hear an instrumental track I want it to tell me something or take me on a journey like a symphony would...this does not. With vocals it could be a completely different story. For a benchmark of what you should strive for as an instrumental rock track listen to Orion.
Bass...recording of the bass track is not good and in places is off. The tone sounds bad to me and it is about as basic as you can get on the bass which is not what I want to hear. If you get a direct box and an active bass (rent one if you don't have one) you can clean up the tone a lot which will allow you to bring the bass further up in the mix. Doing this will make the sound more full and also compliment the rhythm guitar. That said, I am listening on computer speaker made by dell, so I could be missing a lot of the low end here (if so I apologize).
Drums...sound good to me. Whoever recorded this did an especially good job recording the snare.
Lead...sounds good to me. Not my favorite tone, but it is the standard shredding tone and it seems that is what you are going for...so it gets a passing grade. Solos sound tight and well thought out as well.
Interesting that you are using a PRS to get such high tones. I am used to hearing those produce nice rich low tones through mesas. But I guess that is the effects and not the guitar as much.
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