ArielRebel : BIG ANNOUNCEMENT !! FUCKING HOT VIDEO PREVIEW !!!
 

Good editing babe glad you're putting your other skills too use on the site, you have a good eye for edit marks. Only minor change I would recommend is to use the out of focus stuff sparingly or as a transition of a half a second or so into a crisp clear shot, but all this comes in time with practice and experience.

Great first try and look forward too seeing more.

Uncle D

DAMN I GOT Some Serious wood !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


when you cummin over ariel .. I miss ya

Alls I can say is .. I wish you were my Solo Girl .. your very talent and really work hard to make your site successful

I'm so very proud of you sweety !

instant wood :thumbsup
:jerkoff

Ariel....you truly are a one of a kind solo girl...I wish the best with your site and congrats on learning a new talent!

Oh Josh ! It good to see you :) I cant wait to chill out with you again! see you at the next convention?

Nicely done...I am impressed! :thumbsup

ADG

Wow! instant hard-on. goodluck on your site :thumbsup

hmm im gonna show this to a girl who writes for askmen.com maybe she can interview you

I really liked it but I agree with UncleD that the out of focus nipple scene was a little too long. Besides that, it was great...

um ariel, a 10 means good not bad

i voted bad by accident

Looks very hot!!

Looks really hot to me. Good work Ariel.

Ummm... I am not a hater Ariel always love your stuff, but I found that preview quite bland the out focus nipple shot really needs fixing and sorry but the location didn't stimulate the senses needed more color.

Again not being hater just my thoughts;)

Oh wow! that just so nice from you :) It will be more than a pleasure for me to do an interview :)

Send me a private message here on gfy if you got any info about this :)

Thanks again!

Nice vid. I'm sure you'll do well.

Don't feel bad at all! :)

Constructive comments ae always welcome good or bad! I'm keeping that in mind ;) maybe my futur project will be more in your taste!

Thanks for posting :)

you cant send private messages on gfy

Np's, like I said always like your stuff and not saying it was bad couldn't be the case with two very nice girls in it.

:)

thanks.

discount the 7, put me for 3

ariel tu rock comme toujours..:)

when is your gangbang video coming out.

Ariel pretty damn good, keep it up, learning and showing your skills on something like this is very scary, so keep it up.

Miss you Ariel - sites looking great!

Pure hotness...

Awesome! And btw, you're totally hot!

http://images.jupiterimages.com/comm...4/23298424.jpg

Well.. if you want honesty - here is my take on the video

1) Turn off the automatic focus !! The camera is having a hard time finding you and there are several fuzzy scenes that shouldn't be there.

2) Lighting really needs to be addressed especially near the end where you have sun spots and flares

3) Location, Location, Location. I don't mind outside shots but the mirror behind the chair and other items around really shows that no a great deal of thought went behind the set up for the video. Find a larger outdoor patio or better scenery for backdrop.

4) Male camera man? It's the only way I can assume the shaking of the camera is that he was attempting to jerk off watching the action. Try again to find a camera or something to compensate.

You truly love what your doing, and that is what sells. The scene is hot and the passion shows through the lense. Just step up the camera and set-up (basics) and you will have a winner.

That's really cool Ariel. Bravo!

I loved the view :winkwink:


EDIT: sHIT SORRY i VOTED WRONG!@!@!

Yeah I know the location was not the best but I I had so much fun doing it ;) lol... Anyways... as I say to the others I'm keeping your ideas and comments in mind that's for sure!! I just writte it on a paper !

Thanks again!

Ariel Rebel :)

I feel horrible saying something but I don't like giving false statement.

The video is like taking a maserati through a Macdonald's drive thru. Absolutely beautiful car that anyone would kill to have, just not the location and place you would find it.

You know I love you and your work, just that there needs to be an upgrade in camera and location.

Very hot !!!:eyecrazy:eyecrazyWtg Ariel , really nice job:thumbsup
Just another example of how hard and well you work.

Keep it up !!:winkwink:

I too found the video lense out of focus annoying. The color that showed up seemed very flat as well.

Baby oil and girls are always super hot in my opinion though. Overall, good job!

Lol! wow many comments! lol!

This video was took with my photo camera... that's the reason for the annoying focus ;) lol!

Sony cybershot 7X2

I enjoyed it thanks for sharin!

Fun, Playful, spontaneous and full on "woodage".

Technical masterpiece? Who the hell cares.

Sinclair

what a cutie you are, love the trailer!

Very Hot.

You are beautiful.

Love your comment ;)

When editing trailers try and do it to a beat, be it music or just counting off in your head. It gives the trailer more forward motion.

Great job Ariel! That's my REBEL! :thumbsup

Appreciate everyone giving Ariel their opinions many of which are from years of experience. :)

Keep in mind that Ariel is using a small cybershot and she is just now getting the hang of video editing. Also keep in mind her site is about her and not only includes professional material but also amateur home made material. :winkwink:

Again, thanks for all the feedback, i know she appreciates it!

Go Go Ariel! We're proud of you sweetie!

Congrats Ariel! That is fucking awesome.

Rico, I think you forgot to add that she also runs and maintains her own blog too! [/spam]

I congratulate you and belatedly clarified:
 

Ariel,
I congratulate you on your late decent amateur work.
Adding to the view from the "shady panchodog", which he well knows how to "quality and unique human horses are in their stalls").

If I take into account a purely amateur environment in Ariel, the use of the cheap light compact camera instead of full-fledged - and cheap cameras, so the result is a very decent!
When you use the better and heavier camera - not just digital single-lens reflex camera, such as me on the path ... used FujiFilm FinePix S9500 - S9600 (9.2MPx) were the results due to increased lens, the chip and higher světelnost rapidity of lens with manual sharpen much better. But it is not the camera work and the daily wear for the fine girl like this small? and lively Ariel.
The size and weight close to types such as "CANON 200 - Rebel" etc. (This type is that the EU does not sell, but I have said this type because Rebel;).
Another advantage of similar "false compact single-lens reflex camera" is greater scope lens (approx. 27 ° / 35 mm film) and the possibility of raising levels of manual focusing.

"TheLegacy" but also has some good comments on this place - a very amateur work.
Only upřesním that clip shot a man with longer hair:). Its silhouette has been repeatedly briefly in the mirror and window;) Clixx it will not be around, he has other equipment and siluete character looks younger.

If I have a good estimate, it was the first film on a balcony Ariel apartment.
See. her autobiographical movie "Ariel_Rebel_tour.avi" which I delivered a very (more than those with other feature erotic clips;).
And despite its poor quality, the lack of lights in the bedroom ...
I confess that I am this very clip delivered the spite that I understood only a few words and could only follow the voice intonation, expressive face-play and view the camera;)!
I am quite sensitive and umím therefore quite recognize from the mere appearance.

I added to the view TheLegacy.
It would be preferable to film even less clear as day.
Diffuse whiter light, it would be preferable. It would not be so clear background, but again disrupted by the surroundings more. It's about a poorer residential colony.

I confess that I am sorry modest conditions in which Ariel lived there.
Utilities tubes ... in the living room here in CZ only way he sees one. Gold colour it does not.

The Ariel I have a question about what the exact type of camera it is. SONY Camera with 7.2 MPx chip is more, and this distinction is for its creativity and style of photography and filming is already too much. Rather, the suit compact with lower resolution (about 5 MPx) and the larger size and sensitivity of the chip.

Ariel, also I am interested in what you have video editing software.
For a simple amateur work of the test - the "download?", for example, a simple "Pinnacle Studio 11.xx + Bonus Pack" (2 DVD -> 4.5 GB).
For better work, I recommend the use value ratio of price / SW SONY Vegas Video 7.xx - 8.xx + SOYN Architect 7.xx - 8.xx.

Ariel, a software test and buy, or download it from classically Internet). I already know that the visit appz. Like every young today;)! Alternatively, those who I like to send DVD software air post.
I had a problem with the codec itself - using different mass multi-codecs, and I had to install classic WM9Codecs codek.
I anticipate that Ariel is the time of writing this contribution learned a lot. And in the development of personality has progressed - this girl to us in slowly maturing young woman ;-).

I am very hopeful that this text will be longer, perhaps for you to understand Ariel?.
I also like to use and widely ellipsis (? ;)! Often, people with large asociačním thinking and dale among those who are worse the longer term, for example, focus on one activity.

Let me summarize what he said ^^^^^

http://www.nnteenmodels.net/gfy/squirt.gif

Looks pretty good,

To: sarpthead
 

Chlape, wants to more tolerance.
Machine translation jse of language that is completely different and complex sentence construction and grammar.
In Europe it is harder to learn allegedly has only Finnish language!
I love to read SW translation of the English language with small errors - such as slang? total slightly.
It must just be a word in the database translators.
In my Czech language we do not have fixed the link words in the sentence and are not established - and often meaningless phrase. Construction of sentences is very broad and vocabulary words and expression is very rich.

LINK: en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Czech_language

Zdenek Svoboda
The Czech republic