critique my first paysite design

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  • roseyrid
    Confirmed User
    • Feb 2002
    • 1058
    #1

    critique my first paysite design

    ok, this was just a test, and will not go live...none of the links work, but from a designers standpoint...please give me your opinions. I know there are a few spelling errors, and a text out of place, but over all, just your opinions on the look and design
    Click Here

    suggestions and comments are welcome. I am no professional. I usually stick to gallery design. This is my first site design. Took me 3 hours.
    thanks,
    rosey
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    • Brown Bear
      Confirmed User
      • May 2002
      • 4982
      #2
      good job
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        • CumSensei
          Confirmed User
          • Jan 2001
          • 3986
          #3
          Looks clean for sure...
          But it looks a little like any other paysite...
          How will you pormote it?
          If you gonna promote it yourselfe using freesites and shit you will do fine I think
          CumSensei say: SEO traffic makes big boom boom.

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            • d0se
              Confirmed User
              • Jul 2002
              • 1225
              #4
              looks sweet! Maybe think about fonts that are a little more readable.. make your main selling text (in white center screen) bolder font...

              Oh where it says 'teens from heaven' - put some lil pics in a strip behind that text.. make the text stand out.. that should balance it up nicely.

              Tis a winner
              Last edited by d0se; 09-06-2002, 03:18 AM.
              <a href="http://www.swoit.com/_7075fcffae0c1be1a35492ee5bbfaae3/1"><img src="http://www.swoit.com/_7075fcffae0c1be1aab68e286ae87b30/1" border="0" width="120" height="60"></img></a>

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                • lawpal
                  Confirmed User
                  • Feb 2002
                  • 824
                  #5
                  very nice

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                    • hahmike
                      So Fucking Banned
                      • May 2002
                      • 2488
                      #6
                      colors are bad, purple and turquoise?
                      no bro.

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                        • freemind
                          Confirmed User
                          • Aug 2001
                          • 1228
                          #7
                          nice for avs site
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