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  • DebsDeep
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    • Feb 2003
    • 2649
    #1

    Hey guys, what do you think of this pic

    Its my new header for my hosted galleries


    I am open for ideas, I was told my gallery headers i have now were kinda big so i had this one done
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    • DebsDeep
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      • Feb 2003
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      #2
      hey i just realized i am at almost 1000 posts
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        • cardinalvices
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          • Dec 2006
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          #3
          wrong colors man... header associates with zoo porn at first sight..

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            • Don RELISH
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              #4
              Originally posted by cardinalvices
              wrong colors man... header associates with zoo porn at first sight..
              Agreed. You need to show your face, not fuzz.

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                • DebsDeep
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                  • Feb 2003
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                  #5
                  really?...What colors do you suggest?
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                    • cardinalvices
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                      • Dec 2006
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                      #6
                      Colors that dont' make your pics look like they were shot with an amateur camera from a too short distance in a complete darkness. Deepthroat is not about hair and lips, right? Its supposed to be exciting.

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                        • DebsDeep
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                          • Feb 2003
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                          #7
                          lol...it was shot with an amateur camera from a short distance by someone who has no clue about being a photographer. Please understand we are anateurs at this..... I am working on something new right now.....
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                            • F U S I O N
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                              • Jan 2006
                              • 1898
                              #8
                              It kinda took me a few seconds to figure out the pic on the right

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                                • PEcash
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                                  • Nov 2006
                                  • 233
                                  #9
                                  Yea, I agree, I'm really not feeling the color scheme, I would revamp it totally, and choose some colors that are going to be sticky. Also, if it's a deepthroat site, use a picture of a girl that someone can see deepthroating.
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                                    • DeadFidel
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                                      • Jul 2003
                                      • 6764
                                      #10
                                      It's very confusing. It has nothing to do with what you're trying to sell.

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                                        • babsy
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                                          • Mar 2006
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                                          #11
                                          You forgot the apostrophe in "Deb's".

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                                            • Pornopat
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                                              • Dec 2003
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                                              #12
                                              I too needed about 15 second to realize what was in the pic.
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                                                • bobby666
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                                                  • Nov 2005
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                                                  #13
                                                  1. congrats on almost 1k
                                                  2. looks great but i dislike his bushes

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                                                    • JD
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                                                      • Sep 2003
                                                      • 22651
                                                      #14
                                                      at first glance, it's beasty...

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                                                        • Sosa
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                                                          • Oct 2002
                                                          • 40149
                                                          #15
                                                          def show more of your face / cock as you are deepthroating. make it look good and match your colors that you are using in the gallery design.

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                                                            • RAM
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                                                              • Jan 2001
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                                                              #16
                                                              Your doing Great Deb....!!!!
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                                                                • Ayla_SquareTurtle
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                                                                  • Sep 2005
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                                                                  #17
                                                                  from a design standpoint...you probably want to choose a different picture, maybe one where you are facing the camera a bit more at an angle so that you can see the face. Perhaps even have 2 pics, one on the left with the dick about to go in, then on the right with it all the way in.... you might also consider having 4 square pictures, different deep throat shots, with a larger rectangle in the middle with the text.

                                                                  no white or yellow in the text, waaaay too passive. Should be something bright and bold, some very blocky, thick or even bubbly text. Also, the text should be a lot more crisp. As it is, it looks like someone manually cut text off of a flat file and pasted it on.

                                                                  Anyway, those are just my initial observations and what I would tell a client if they asked.

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                                                                    • pornguy
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                                                                      • Mar 2003
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                                                                      #18
                                                                      I dont like it. Sorry.
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                                                                        • nokriy
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                                                                          • Mar 2006
                                                                          • 92
                                                                          #19
                                                                          I totally agree with this person

                                                                          also, it kinda makes me want to fk a goat

                                                                          Originally posted by Ayla_AAA
                                                                          from a design standpoint...you probably want to choose a different picture, maybe one where you are facing the camera a bit more at an angle so that you can see the face. Perhaps even have 2 pics, one on the left with the dick about to go in, then on the right with it all the way in.... you might also consider having 4 square pictures, different deep throat shots, with a larger rectangle in the middle with the text.

                                                                          no white or yellow in the text, waaaay too passive. Should be something bright and bold, some very blocky, thick or even bubbly text. Also, the text should be a lot more crisp. As it is, it looks like someone manually cut text off of a flat file and pasted it on.

                                                                          Anyway, those are just my initial observations and what I would tell a client if they asked.

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                                                                            • TurboAngel
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                                                                              • Jun 2003
                                                                              • 30122
                                                                              #20
                                                                              Originally posted by Sosa
                                                                              def show more of your face / cock as you are deepthroating. make it look good and match your colors that you are using in the gallery design.

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                                                                                • edgeprod
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                                                                                  • Mar 2004
                                                                                  • 10019
                                                                                  #21
                                                                                  Originally posted by cardinalvices
                                                                                  wrong colors man... header associates with zoo porn at first sight..
                                                                                  For sure.

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                                                                                    • Got Porn?
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                                                                                      • Nov 2005
                                                                                      • 1264
                                                                                      #22
                                                                                      I don't like it, too much of a close up.

                                                                                      But l love your animated gif.



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                                                                                        • garyhodough
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                                                                                          • May 2006
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                                                                                          #23
                                                                                          Yeah it does look a little zooy....
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                                                                                            • 4Man
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                                                                                              • Nov 2006
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                                                                                              #24
                                                                                              It could be better...

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                                                                                                • edgeprod
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                                                                                                  #25
                                                                                                  Originally posted by garyhodough
                                                                                                  Yeah it does look a little zooy....
                                                                                                  I had my credit card out and ready, then realized it wasn't zoo-sex.

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                                                                                                    • sharp
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                                                                                                      • Jan 2003
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                                                                                                      #26
                                                                                                      I thought I saw a donkey at first glance. It took me a while to realize that it was just a hairy ass dude. Terrible banner, IMO. You don't want to turn OFF your visitors.

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                                                                                                        • WebTitan
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                                                                                                          #27
                                                                                                          definitly does not jump right out at you

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                                                                                                            • alexg
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                                                                                                              #28
                                                                                                              we need a free pass

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                                                                                                                • DebsDeep
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                                                                                                                  #29
                                                                                                                  ok
                                                                                                                  been trying some stuff



                                                                                                                  and or



                                                                                                                  And thanks for all the input, I see now what you guys mean about the zoo thing
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                                                                                                                    • 4Man
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                                                                                                                      #30
                                                                                                                      Good work man

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                                                                                                                        • DebsDeep
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                                                                                                                          #31
                                                                                                                          thanks
                                                                                                                          Hopefully i will get something that everyone believes will work to its full potential
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                                                                                                                            • Pinacolada
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                                                                                                                              #32
                                                                                                                              Not so good but not bad...

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                                                                                                                                • PEcash
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                                                                                                                                  • Nov 2006
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                                                                                                                                  #33
                                                                                                                                  getting better

                                                                                                                                  Originally posted by debsdeepthroat
                                                                                                                                  ok
                                                                                                                                  been trying some stuff



                                                                                                                                  and or



                                                                                                                                  And thanks for all the input, I see now what you guys mean about the zoo thing

                                                                                                                                  I would remove the picture on the left because you really can't see what's going on, and get rid of that brownish background color, go with a color that's more sticky and attractive, and I need a free pass to the site, hook it up?
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                                                                                                                                    • SexualDragon
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                                                                                                                                      #34
                                                                                                                                      Deb! Turn on your icq when you have a chance..I requested an authorization. Let's talk biz
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                                                                                                                                        • DebsDeep
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                                                                                                                                          #35
                                                                                                                                          more sticky? explain please? I thought yellow was pretty loud and sticky...but you guys said no to yellow
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                                                                                                                                            • Dragar
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                                                                                                                                              • Sep 2006
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                                                                                                                                              #36
                                                                                                                                              its all good except the picture of yourself should be on the left hand side of you web title allowing for a good glance at the knob google

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                                                                                                                                                • Adult Search Results
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                                                                                                                                                  #37
                                                                                                                                                  too "close" for my liking
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                                                                                                                                                    • chartgraves
                                                                                                                                                      #38
                                                                                                                                                      the purple one is better than red now. However, I would use a different font. Go on the web and download something new. Bubbly, blocky, or bold - And that glow you have around text should be rerduced or removed. I would use some sort of lighting effects or something. I will create a banner for you if you give me a un/pw.

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                                                                                                                                                        • DebsDeep
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                                                                                                                                                          #39
                                                                                                                                                          k i am on
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                                                                                                                                                            • DaddyHalbucks
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                                                                                                                                                              #40
                                                                                                                                                              I love your sample movie and the animated GIF. But, I'd rework the header. Show your pretty smiling face.

                                                                                                                                                              I always ask my designer to do multiple versions. Then you can pick and choose the elements which work for the final copy.
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                                                                                                                                                                • Adultnet
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                                                                                                                                                                  #41
                                                                                                                                                                  Originally posted by Adult Search Results
                                                                                                                                                                  too "close" for my liking
                                                                                                                                                                  mate more work is needed..!


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                                                                                                                                                                    • CaptainHowdy
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                                                                                                                                                                      • Dec 2004
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                                                                                                                                                                      #42
                                                                                                                                                                      Originally posted by cardinalvices
                                                                                                                                                                      wrong colors man... header associates with zoo porn at first sight..
                                                                                                                                                                      My toughts exactly... Overall, it's a creepy header.

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                                                                                                                                                                        • Brad
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                                                                                                                                                                          #43
                                                                                                                                                                          I'd just use a close up of a girl chocking on a dick and get rid of all of the other pics on there. the "ultimate kiss" text looks like pretty cheesy too
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                                                                                                                                                                            • carol.prime
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                                                                                                                                                                              keep practicing and experimenting, it will help more. goodluck
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                                                                                                                                                                                • Elli
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                                                                                                                                                                                  #45
                                                                                                                                                                                  Wow, a helpful business thread! Who knew?

                                                                                                                                                                                  I find banners to be very tricky too, Deb. I always pass them through a few of my loyal members for feedback before deciding which one to go with.
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                                                                                                                                                                                    • Fluid
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                                                                                                                                                                                      #46
                                                                                                                                                                                      Originally posted by debsdeepthroat
                                                                                                                                                                                      Its my new header for my hosted galleries


                                                                                                                                                                                      I am open for ideas, I was told my gallery headers i have now were kinda big so i had this one done
                                                                                                                                                                                      here's my thoughts..for what they're worth.

                                                                                                                                                                                      Make some eye contact. People want to see what they're buying, and if you're amateur, you're selling you. Not only your body, and sex acts, but your personality too and so much of that can come through the eyes. At the very least, they'd show that you're enjoying what you're doing (or gagging so hard your eyes water) and that goes a LONG way ;)

                                                                                                                                                                                      Not to be insulting, but the pic on the left looks like cousin IT. Unless you're working the long hair niche, I'd pic a shot that shows your face, or at least your best features.

                                                                                                                                                                                      Also..it's pretty sparse. This is an ad right? You're paying for every KB of data you load (assuming you're not freehosted) so why would you load a KB that isn't promoting you? Magazine ads don't have dead space, neither do smart retail stores, your headers and banners shouldn't either. Get as much of your "product" in front of the surfer as you can ;)

                                                                                                                                                                                      As far as picture quality, I'd start hitting up a board like amateur masters and look for other amateurs in your area that you could do content swaps with in return for photo services. It's a low cost way of increasing your exposure and getting higher quality content shot.

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                                                                                                                                                                                        • teenytricia
                                                                                                                                                                                          So Fucking Banned
                                                                                                                                                                                          • Jan 2007
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                                                                                                                                                                                          #47
                                                                                                                                                                                          i think its great!

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                                                                                                                                                                                            • emthree
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                                                                                                                                                                                              • Jun 2003
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                                                                                                                                                                                              #48
                                                                                                                                                                                              I think it needs a new deep throat picture.
                                                                                                                                                                                              That one looks half horse or something.

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                                                                                                                                                                                                • PEcash
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                                                                                                                                                                                                  #49
                                                                                                                                                                                                  Originally posted by Fluid
                                                                                                                                                                                                  here's my thoughts..for what they're worth.

                                                                                                                                                                                                  Make some eye contact. People want to see what they're buying, and if you're amateur, you're selling you. Not only your body, and sex acts, but your personality too and so much of that can come through the eyes. At the very least, they'd show that you're enjoying what you're doing (or gagging so hard your eyes water) and that goes a LONG way ;)

                                                                                                                                                                                                  Not to be insulting, but the pic on the left looks like cousin IT. Unless you're working the long hair niche, I'd pic a shot that shows your face, or at least your best features.

                                                                                                                                                                                                  Also..it's pretty sparse. This is an ad right? You're paying for every KB of data you load (assuming you're not freehosted) so why would you load a KB that isn't promoting you? Magazine ads don't have dead space, neither do smart retail stores, your headers and banners shouldn't either. Get as much of your "product" in front of the surfer as you can ;)

                                                                                                                                                                                                  As far as picture quality, I'd start hitting up a board like amateur masters and look for other amateurs in your area that you could do content swaps with in return for photo services. It's a low cost way of increasing your exposure and getting higher quality content shot.

                                                                                                                                                                                                  Lots of good ideas here Deb. When I say more sticky, I'm really just talking about the color scheme/or flow if you will. You want an add (or Banner) that is going to catch an eye when it's displayed. I'm just not getting the POP that I like to see in banners from this one. (No disrespect by any means).
                                                                                                                                                                                                  I'm so really hating the image with you taking one all the way in and so close. Pan the camera back more so that you can really see what's your greatest profession. And like was stated before, I really hate, even visiting the site how you use that image covering half of your face, you need to close the deal with (like stated), your face, eyes, body, etc,etc.....
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                                                                                                                                                                                                    • DutchTeenCash
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                                                                                                                                                                                                      #50
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Originally posted by F U S I O N
                                                                                                                                                                                                      It kinda took me a few seconds to figure out the pic on the right
                                                                                                                                                                                                      same here

                                                                                                                                                                                                      that guy has to shave and a better pic - zoom out more

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