Would this design sell?
 

I have tried to come up with a site for UK Pornchicks..It needs some tweeking and all the links going to the join page are not working as the site is not yet live..but what are peoples initial thoughts?

UK Pornochicks

The row of girls photos which link to their pages is going to be duplicated below the join and members area strip with another 7 different girls to help increase sign up ratios..


Any thoughts good bad or Krome "fuck off, dont be a cheap skate and get on the phone to Amp" are appreciated..

Better than anything I've seen around here lately. :thumbsup

the thumbnail images are not too good - the look fuzzy/blurry
better than what I could do for a tour, though - I suck at graphics. I rely on my potty mouth ;)

Looks really good. Good idea.

Vida was a real diamond, one of the lads type of a girl. have not seen her for years. Tracey was sweet as well.

nice job. clean design.

My two favourites...I used to live near Tracey and saw her around alot...dam she is sexy...

That design is tight. If you want my personal opinion, I would redo the thumbnails. (all of them except the first seem blurry) Kinda like they were video caps. I would also use a black outline on the models names in the thumbs to make them stand out a little more

And I would make the Click here for Instant Access a flashing gif. This way it will make it stand out because that and the Members Entrance links sort of blend in with the layout.

You want to make it simple as possible for a surfer to get to your join page :thumbsup

I dont like it.. I dont like some of the girls on the thumbs, plus the thumbs are blurry. I clicked on one of the thumbs and turned away for a second when I got back I never noticed the page had changed after I clicked again. Make the other pages slightly different fromt he splash page.

But mainly, thinking as the surfer, not something I would buy a membership to after seeing the tour. Need more incentive and better pictures on the tour. Put yourself in the surfer's page and ask yourself the same question seeing your tour.

i like it... it looks nice and i think it might have a shot...

Not all paysites need to look like a ten dollar whore with 50 pounds of make up or blinking lights etc...

Those thumbs are kinda blurry...

Hey since you know your brit porn girls ...

I went to school with Michele Butler [even had a drink with her CUM CUM CUM] Any idea what she is doing now?

I can't even find pics of her let alone info.

it would sell but dont rely on my opinion... make a poll and get your results

I am sure I have seen her on a few models agencies...but she is never offered...I suppose she has most probably packed it all in.

she never made any films did she..fuck it she has retired...(my guess)

Ok as long as you're going to have a different page for each chick -- use a horizontal bar under each of the thumbs (use .GIF of X width -- and just change the position of the red line for each girl) -- so when you click the thumb you know that the page has changed and you are looking at the girl you just clicked on -- well you could take that idea further.

right now it's too uniform -- needs more color movement -- throw in some excitement -- maybe some animated stars -- just throw in some moving lines or some movement... lighting effects in photoshop can make anything look flashy too...

make the thumbs bigger, boost the sharpness on them maybe to get them more clear... Maybe take one of your hottest chicks standing up and put her in the background or on the side border... like she's the tour guide...

I'm not a pro on tours at all but one thing I think is important is try to color correct all of your pics so that they look consistent -- it it looks like you got pics from a bunch of different photographers all mixed up it looks bad...

and # make eye contact w/ the surfer...

nice site -- tired of the same old tours. Think the individual girl is a good approach. Good luck with it

http://www.ukpornochicks.com/

Had Justin from http://www.xxxdesign.co.uk revamp it...what about now?

much better.

I agree 100%, I think all the flash and shit is driving customers away. Fine looking site Krome, I hope it does well for you !!

:thumbsup

Thanks Bone Prone!!

Second version is much better, I like the overall design but still feel you need the page to change more when a girl is clicked on.

Maybe a light brush stroke diagonaly behind the text, use pale colors and change the color for each girl or something. Or maybe an arrow pointing at the small pic, or a line like someone else suggested.

If you blink or turn away while it's loading the girl's pic you may not realize the page has changed.

farbie

The revamped design looks great. Quality stuff. That will definitely sell.

You only wish I was the Bone, he deserves much more respect than you can offer to my most honorable master. Don't confuse my feable attempt at humor with the great boneprone.:1orglaugh

I got an idea..

How about make
http://www.ukpornochicks.com/michelle.htm
the girl is on the left and the text on the right

http://www.ukpornochicks.com/emma.htm
The next girl (thumb) over put the big image of the girl on the right and the text on the left..


Just an idea.

Oh and P.S.
I would sugest a join now link in part the surfer will see in 800x600 res.. Still more than 50% of all my surfers.

go fuck yourself krome, where the hell is linda leigh?! :thefinger

actually cool idea...thanks...how much do I owe you for that and do you except pay pal?

Leigh Leigh is a haggered old hooker....apparently she has broken her ankle hence why she was not at full service last night.