please critique my galleries
 

Will design you 5 galleries for $20 paypal/epassporte (because I'm new)

http://www.addedsize.com/designs/tawnee4.html

http://www.addedsize.com/designs/Tawnee2.html

http://www.addedsize.com/designs/tawnee3.html

Do they look O.K?

no text, no sponsor links, no convincing nothing besides a page full of pic and a big ass ugly design.. btw the thumbnails look like shit too.

hope this helps you, everyone was always thanksful when I spoke the truth about there stuff.

Without sounding to harsh, I have to agree with what he said :2 cents:

Take those tips and keep practising and I am sure you can create something much better.

you def need more text that sells

The purpose of a gallery is that you can click the thumbs to see the pictures.
I see you try to sell your services but it's all very basic I can do such a gallery template in about 4 minutes.

hell si!!!!!

Well, I didnt add any sponsor links because I'm just trying this stuff out. What are some galleries that look good.. I see a whole lot that have the basic idea that I portrayed here.

Teach me

they look different

Forget about submitting to The Hun with the size of those pics. I'm a table and CSS guy and prefer it over slicing.

However, I like the fact that they look different, but you definitely need to plug in some text.

thanks Ill work on it