please comment on my latest site/project...
 

well, after working 2 days straight on this site I'm finally proud to say I believe it's ready to go live.

have a look: http://www.lovelylizvicious.com/

if you have any advice on how I could improve the site I'd love to hear your thoughts. also, if you know of any possible ideas on how I can market the site and gain exposure I'd love to know as well because I won't be adding any hard links or anything like that to this particular site, I want it to be simply dedicated to jaYMancash.com and Liz Vicious....

thanks in advance!

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Looks pretty cool

great looking but whats the point. why sign up for a site when you've given me all the movies and pictures that they have for free just about.

looks pretty decent...

looks tres good

Not sure why you use the word "lovely" to describe a goth chick.

My comment has nothing to do with her looks, it just sounds incongruent.

I checked the main site and noticed that there too the persona they gave her seems more like goth lite than real goth (btw, the copy seems like it was written by a dude).

Too much black mascara does not a goth make...

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I 2nd that

I agree.. I see these goddamned shrines to solo girls everywhere..

all you'll get for SE traffic, for the most part, are people doing searches using her name,,, they're not paying customers... I used to get 1000's a day for brooke skye,, everyday, 1000's of google hits for "Brooke Skye" with various descriptions that included her name,, never made a single sale with it,,,

Actually, didnt start making sales on her site til I stopped using her name on the gallery descriptions.

Nice job on layout, looks good, but good luck sales wise...

That's real idiot thing to do.. put a webmasters make money link on your site,, Like we really need surfers trying to become webmasters.. :1orglaugh

On another note, surfer clicks it, sees something else offered by jaymancash , like bangingbecky or some other site, joins up & guess who just made nothing at all from a stupid traffic leak that should not be on a page designed for surfers.

Some honest criticism...the design looks like a 5 dollar template.

Isn't cam2cam also a template?

I never thought about that, maybe I'll remove the webmaster link

it is, but actually I got a deal for only $4 :1orglaugh

too much free shit

I agree, there is a lot of free stuff, I'm not saying the site is perfect in any way, that's why I came here for advice on how to improve it. Although there is quite a bit of free stuff there though (which I'll work to improve) it's still not close to the amount of stuff surfers will get by actually joining the official site, I'll just have to work on a few things perhaps to make the site better and draw sales.

how would you guys advertise a site/domain dedicated to solo girl?
what kinds of content/how much would you have there?

to little and site would look empty, too much and it's TOO much.

Maybe alot of content but limit it to only softcore and no cumshots etc?

Well... why bookmark this?

If you want actual bookmarkers put in a rotating script and offer the surfer 2 or 3 free galleries a day.. perhaps 2 pics and 1 movie...

But giving them about 30 is just going to make it so they find that 1 gallery that satisfies them... Sure, you might get 2 or 3 sales a week, but if you did what I said to do it'd increase to 5 to 7....

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Noice. :thumbsup

The front page is a design...the demo is where the template is.

The application needs to have a design put over it. Unless a client wanted to use it of course :1orglaugh

I don't understand why a sponsor would allow so much free content from one site to be posted in one place, particularly when you say things like, "Here you will find only the best Liz Vicious content on the web!". Wouldn't HER OWN SITE have the best content on the web? Your free site sounds less like advertising/good exposure, and more like competition.

There shouldn't be any such sites.. should only be 2 galleries max.. just like a regular shrine but no, webmasters still instist on fucking linking every damn FHG for a single site on their site.. fuck, look at freeones,,, those fuckers will link 50000 FHG of one girl.

Webmasters building shrines to their favorite slut should be horsewhipped.

too dark, you need to get some design on the black

If you want the truth: the site looks like it was designed by a high schooler for his summer project.

Why show the pink for free? Make the surfer pay for it. Hell a guy can jerk off in 5 mins to your site why would he sign up?

Too much content for a freesite; what you've got there is like a fake TGP with tons of galleries of only one model.

I wouldn't expect great conversions... Then again, feed it traffic and see. Maybe it'll work; you'll certainly get bookmarkers.

(You could rotate ads for other sites for those bookmarkers who visit regularly).

I don't know the conversions freeones get but they seem very successful

you spelled exclusive wrong :(