Critque this gallery...
 

Yes I know it is on a free host... Till I can make galleries that don't suck that is where they are going to stay..

http://adult.pornparks.com/porn/Gall...02/Page00.html

Let me know what would make it better...

Think like a surfer. Are those pix good enough to make me want to see more of them?

regards

shemp

Those pics are too grainy and fuzzy

ugh. take out the ones with the plumper in the front.

hmmm... me thinks I may have over compressed them..
Ya think?

Holy shit, did you see the level of the water drop down when she stood up in that last pic?? LOL!!! :1orglaugh


But nice catchy design though, the colors and fonts are appealing. It just needs something..... some "oomph" in the ad copy. And yes, there could be a bit more sex play going on in the pics. Even a little nipple sucking here and there would work, it would help to hint to the surfer than there is much more to see if they click your sponsor.

nah, i was too busy *not looking* to notice.

im runnin IE 5.0 and the resolution on that page sux. change it to fit most browser windows. white on black doesnt really tickle my pickle, spice up the colors a lil bit and get a lil bit better quality pics......for more ideas surf the archives of some of the top tgp's around.

bunky

Nice pics except for the fat girl. Email the content provider and tell them to tell the photographer to tell the girl to go on a diet...FAST.

-eru

I will have to admit that the old& fat one is a bit scary.. There are a few shots where she is getting in the tub and the other girls have a look of... well.. you know... EEEEWW! on their faces..

As for resolution, I am shooting to keep it in a 800 width window.. This not a good thing to do?

Hey man I am not going to go into details because then I would be given my secerts away at getting listed and getting signups

I build galleries for $5.00 till wed then im going up to $8.00 I will also give you 25 megs of space and unlimited bandwith if you want.

email me [email protected]
PEACE
BTW your gallery is erm plain btw if you can not afford to pay me to do galleries for you I may work something out where I will do one or two for free to prove what I say is 100% True

Peace

don't listen to anyone telling you to hide the fat chick - he's selling a fucking fat chick site - what is he supposed to use, pornstars?

va2k
dude, fix your sig file

HAHAHA

This is true, I'm not pushing pornstars! Love watching people twitch when I ask them to rewiew my fat chick pages.

I will have to make a really nasty one next time..

i have a ton of fat bitch pictures, it wasnt planned either.. it's just what happens when you buy the $35 pic package.

way to pimp the fat dyke though.

LOL.. i was going to point that out.. jeezus in fact i'd go the opposite and say if you're selling FATsluttywomen.com you need a few more plumpers!.. the rest of the girls look average sized.. jeez guys.. pay attention to the target market before you comment.

Ok, so I'm not going ot fuck with the layout 'cause I am too brain dead to be creative. I did go back ad fix the pics though. That look better?

I'd use different font faces on the text - mix shit up

maybe make links Arial, and plain text comic sans MS

I would make those text links about 500 - 700 pixels wide
+4 at least - prefer to span the thumbs table

"enter here free" doesn't thrill me

HORNY FAT WHORES WHO WANT YOUR HARD COCK!

CLICK HERE FOR FAT SLOPPY SLUTS - FREE!

FREE FAT CUM CHUGGERS - CLICK HERE!

BLOW YOUR LOAD ON BIG FAT TITS - CLICK HERE!

those might pull better clicks, and since it is a for free type AVS you should still convert. So pump the hits to it

also, try to clean up the thumbs, if possible

UGH! Nazty!

That one bitch is really fat!, Id have to stick that in the plumpers area just cuz of her!...

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