Just made a new video-trailer. Will it sell?
 

Hi there :)

Please help. I just spent two days editing a trailer for an upcomming site:

CLICK HERE TO PLAY TRAILER

What do you think? Does it look professional enough? Does it make you wanna buy a membership? Constructive criticism is highly appreciated :)

Thank you very much for your help!

gotta say it's pretty hot!! -- love those couple of scenes in the middle there, the two girls licking that guy, the other girl in laytex getting pounded

VERY HOT!!

Like the trailer for the most part. Could of done without the Washington monument dick shot and the worst video angle in porn, that of course being the male brown eye as he fucks a chick.

It fits fetish, which I am not really into and it did not make me want to join your site and I can explain more but I have this urge to go kidnap some woman right now. :winkwink: (sarcasm)

I think it should work fairly well.

Looks pretty scary. Yea if I was about to go murder some teenage girls It might make me want to buy a membership, well afterall I guess that is the kind of market your going after, right?

looks very good, nice job

Thanks for your replies everyone :)

Lol, wtfent how the hell did you manage to connect this trailer with killing teenage girls? It's all about the love for shiny latex baby :)

ASM: Thanks for some good points :) You always give good advice on this board :thumbsup

it rocks...


Mr. Romance

My feeling was it was more like a trailer for a horror movie then a porn site, buy hey im not into the latex niche so who knows.

I also know you can not cover it all in one trailer but I was really waiting for a liquid latex, or hot wax pouring scene. Or maybe some spark arching between two electrodes being brought toward a bound model.

Again though no idea about this niche.

BTW thank you for your comment.

:thumbsup :thumbsup :thumbsup

Hot and kinky.....

Looks professional to me....nice job!

HEy awesome shit homeboy . if that was my cup of tea i would sign up.
keep up the good work.

homegirl sorry anna

Well, liquid latex would have been really cool, but unfortunately we don't have any such footage. Wax and electricity are more bd/sm stuff.

Thanks for all the positive replies guys and gals - but I'm actually more interested in what you don't like about it... ;)

You did a great job..I like it

Thanks Spunky :)

Well, Í'm going to bed now... Will check this thread again in the morning. Take care!

I thought is pretty good. But it needed more content. Looked a little too much like a music video.

The trailer is hot, but there is at least one scene in there that would qualify as potentially "non-consentual sex" (the girl getting it from behind right after the anal shot, it would appear she is restrained). Considering your domain admin in in Canada, you might want to think twice about that or at least consult a lawyer before using it.

Alex

looks hot...some nice scenes in there

Agreed, our lawyer told us that anyone bound should not be penetrated by neither toy nor person or it will be considered rape, no matter if she's screaming "FUCK ME, FUCK ME" or not.

Well done. Thumbs up for that. :)

I think it looks hot, really hot.

the only thing i did not like about it was everytime a scene finsihed it went to a black screen for a second, it could have done without that.

nice work

It's looks good, i think it will sell.

me likey :upsidedow

it's "moody" and fits the market. it should work well :thumbsup

I was just trying to start drama on a kind of contoversial adult genre. This stuff has always freaked me out a little after I saw my dad wearing one of those masks when I walked in on him and my mom when i was little. :Oh crap

OMG, it is really good.

the niche does nothing for me, but...

the trailer is beautifully done and will convert on appropriate traffic.

kudos to the editor.

The clip looks good to me.

pretty hot stuff

Hmmm... This was indeed news for us. Thanks for pointing it out! Is this only illegal in Canada? The scene is from a very popular DVD that's sold lagally all over the world. Maybe it would be best to replace it anyway...

good stuff man! :thumbsup

Nice trailer....

The editing is great. Very creepy, but with a professional touch. The black spaces between scenes did feel a bit too longo for me too.


Nice job :thumbsup

LOADING...
that is nice rather hot.

Thanks for the feedback :)

My lawyer was advising on Canada only, so I don't know about the rest of the world. He also told us that while it's very unlikely that anyone would prosocute you on it, if they wanted a reason to, there's tons of these laws "on the books" that they can throw at you just to make your life miserable.

Thanks for the info jact :) Even though the only thing that connects us to Canada is our domain registrar, it's safer to just replace that scene. No need to bring on more problems than needed.

nice work

not my niche.. kinda scary heh.s

I wasn't into latex or bondage before. I am now.

What do you think?
- excellent!!! :thumbsup

Does it look professional enough?
- absolutely!

Does it make you wanna buy a membership?
- no (not a guy, don't buy porn)... but makes me want to watch the clip over and over again :upsidedow good job!

Wow, thanks for the nice comments :)

klixxxgirl, we have actually a good bunch of female memers to fetishbyanna.com. Buying porn is not only for guys ;)

Now I'm going to bed. Have a good one everybody!

nice job on the trailer.

btw you have a js error on your tgp....
Line: 68
Char: 7
Erro: 'document.getElementByld(...)' is null or not an object
Code: 0
Url: http//www.annasdungeon.com/

ur welcome

Thanks for the praise :)

Never gotten that javascript error myself, but I'll see if we can get it fixxed. Have no real knowledge of java whatsoever though ;)